Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I'd like go to library”应为“I like to go to the library”。回答较为冗长且重复“quiet”，建议简化表达并使用更多连接词使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place to study. For example, when I study math there, I can easily find relevant books, which helps me learn better.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够清晰，有重复和语法错误，如“sometimes I will, sometimes I mean, I will”。建议简洁明了地表达主要活动，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Exemplo: In the library, I usually do my homework and sometimes read books. It is a quiet place where I can concentrate, and I can borrow books for free.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达混乱，如“gave birth to give birth”。建议简洁说明原因，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达。

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I lived in a poor countryside where there was no library.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复“very poor”，句子结构不够流畅。建议使用连接词连接句子，避免重复，并提供更具体的例子。

Exemplo: I think it depends on where children live. In poor rural areas, kids rarely go to libraries because there are none, but in big cities like Guangzhou, children often visit libraries.

× Yes, I'd like go to library very much.

✓ Yes, I'd like to go to the library very much.

动词like后面需要接动词不定式to go，而不是直接接动词原形go；另外，library前需要加定冠词the。

× I think library is very quiet and warm place for me to study.

✓ I think the library is a very quiet and warm place for me to study.

可数名词library前需要加定冠词the；形容词短语前需要加不定冠词a。

× when I study maths in library, I can find some books about maths, it's very quiet and professional.

✓ when I study math in the library, I can find some books about math; it's very quiet and professional.

math通常用不可数形式；library前需要加定冠词the；句子中两个分句应用分号或句号分开。

× In the library, I usually write my homework and sometimes I will, sometimes I mean, I will read some books because probably it's a very quiet place for me to write homework and I can buy some book, I can borrow some books without money.

✓ In the library, I usually do my homework and sometimes, I mean, I will read some books because it's a very quiet place for me to do homework and I can borrow some books without paying money.

homework是不可数名词，不能用write，应该用do；book前缺少复数形式或冠词；buy some book不合适，应改为borrow some books；without money表达不准确，应改为without paying money。

× No, actually, before entering into university I didn't go to any library because I gave birth to give birth in a very poor home, a very poor home, and there was no library in our countryside.

✓ No, actually, before entering university I didn't go to any library because I was born in a very poor home, and there was no library in our countryside.

gave birth to give birth用法错误，应该用被动语态was born；entering into university中into多余，应去掉。

× I think it may depend on their home conditions and their living place.

✓ I think it may depend on their home conditions and where they live.

living place用法不自然，改为where they live更符合英语表达习惯。

× Because in some very poor in very poor countryside the children can't go to a library, but in very big site like Guangzhou children can often go to library.

✓ Because in some very poor countryside, children can't go to a library, but in very big cities like Guangzhou, children can often go to the library.

去掉重复的in very poor；site用错，应为cities；library前需要加定冠词the。