Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear due to redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add one or two clear supporting details using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Avoid repeating ideas and focus on clarity.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading comic books at home. However, when I find an interesting book, I like to read it quietly in my room rather than in public places like parks.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and better linking words. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I like to go there' and 'I prefer to read my thing.' Try to be more specific about what you do and why.

Exemplo: Whenever I visit the library, I usually find a quiet spot to focus on my studies, especially during exam periods. This helps me concentrate better than studying at home.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing, such as 'I went to any library.' Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because there wasn't one near my home. Since I lived in a village, I usually studied at home instead.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct opinion first, then support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'like' and be more concise and precise.

Exemplo: I'm not sure about Chinese children specifically, but I believe that going to the library depends more on personal preference than nationality. Many kids might enjoy libraries because they offer a quiet place to study.

× No, I'm not really fond of reading books, but sometime when I like want to read the book or have an interesting comic book, like funny books that I really like to read, then I prefer to sit in my room alone to read that.

✓ No, I'm not really fond of reading books, but sometimes when I want to read a book or have an interesting comic book, like funny books that I really like to read, then I prefer to sit in my room alone to read it.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'The book' should be 'a book' because it refers to any book, not a specific one. 'That' replaces 'that' to refer back to the book or comic book correctly.

× And I like to read always loud or sometime I like to read the book or anything like that.

✓ And I always like to read aloud or sometimes I like to read a book or anything like that.

The adverb 'always' should precede the verb 'like' for correct placement. 'Loud' should be 'aloud' when referring to reading out loud. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× In parks I don't.

✓ I don't in parks.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. A better phrasing is 'I don't in parks' or 'I don't read in parks.' However, to keep the original meaning, it should be 'I don't read in parks.'

× So whenever I visit a library then I always prefer to sit and concentrate on my reading.

✓ So whenever I visit a library, I always prefer to sit and concentrate on my reading.

The word 'then' is unnecessary and disrupts the flow; removing it improves sentence clarity.

× Specially when I have exams then I like to go there.

✓ Especially when I have exams, I like to go there.

'Specially' is incorrect; the correct word is 'especially.' Also, 'then' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× No, I don't think so. I went to any library when I was a kid because there was no library near to my house.

✓ No, I don't think so. I didn't go to any library when I was a kid because there was no library near my house.

The verb 'went' is incorrect here; the negative form requires 'didn't go.' Also, 'near to my house' should be 'near my house' as 'near' does not require 'to.'

× I was. I used to live in a village so there was no library nearby.

✓ I was. I used to live in a village, so there was no library nearby.

A comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses properly.

× Maybe the Chinese children's kids like to go to the library.

✓ Maybe Chinese children like to go to the library.

'Children's kids' is redundant and incorrect; 'children' alone is sufficient and correct.

× They find it more quiet place as compared to another thing.

✓ They find it a quieter place compared to other places.

'More quiet' should be 'quieter' for correct comparative form. 'As compared to another thing' is awkward; 'compared to other places' is clearer and more natural.

× Well, I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I'm an Indian, but I think they are like it's not depend on the nationality and gender, It's depend on the choice of different people.

✓ Well, I'm not sure about Chinese kids because I'm an Indian, but I think it's not dependent on nationality and gender; it depends on the choice of different people.

'It's not depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it's not dependent.' Also, 'It's depend' should be 'it depends.' The sentence is better connected with a semicolon or period instead of a comma.