Library— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Do you often go to the library?
Candidato
Umm, to be perfectly honest, I'm not a bookworm person, so. And moreover, I can easily find any book online. Uh, so I never go there now, but when I was a kid, I used to go to the school library, uh, almost every day.
Examinador
What do you usually do in the library?
Candidato
Uh, I think the first that I do is searching any book that I don't have at home because that's a great way to read, uh, something unique and then I'm fine. I, I'm trying to find a place without any strangers around.
Examinador
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Candidato
Yeah, sure. I used to go there almost every day when I was a schoolgirl because I didn't have enough books at home, so the school library was the most pleasant place to enjoy different stories about castles and Dragons.
Examinador
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Candidato
To be perfectly honest, I'm not familiar with traditions in China, but I suppose that they do because Chinese people are very dedicated and passionate about studying. They spend more than six hours at school, so they definitely do go to the library.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'Umm' and 'Uh'. Also, structure your response with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.
Exemplo: I don't often go to the library nowadays because I can easily find books online. However, when I was a child, I used to visit the school library almost every day to read various books.
What do you usually do in the library?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide more specific details about your activities in the library.
Exemplo: Usually, I first search for books that I don't have at home because it's a great way to discover unique content. Then, I try to find a quiet spot where I can read without distractions.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding informal phrases like 'Yeah, sure' and by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Exemplo: Yes, I used to go to the library almost every day as a child because I didn't have many books at home. Therefore, the school library was a pleasant place where I enjoyed reading stories about castles and dragons.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Avoid starting with phrases like 'To be perfectly honest' which can sound uncertain. Use more confident language and link your ideas clearly to support your opinion.
Exemplo: Although I'm not very familiar with Chinese traditions, I believe Chinese children often go to the library because they are dedicated students who spend many hours at school and value studying.
Gramática
× I think the first that I do is searching any book that I don't have at home because that's a great way to read, uh, something unique and then I'm fine.
✓ I think the first thing that I do is search for any book that I don't have at home because that's a great way to read something unique, and then I'm fine.
The phrase 'searching any book' is incorrect because 'searching' should be in the base form 'search' after 'is' and 'any book' should be preceded by 'for' to indicate the object of the search. Also, 'the first that I do' should be 'the first thing that I do' to be grammatically correct.
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