Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách ngắn gọn và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ không chính xác như 'informations' (phải là 'information'). Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: I used to go to the library two or three times a week when I was a child to find my favorite comics. However, now I rarely go because I can find the information I need more easily on the Internet.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'hire others have me' và câu phức tạp không rõ nghĩa. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to study and read books. Sometimes, I compare the prices of books in the library with those online to decide whether to buy or borrow them.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần tránh câu hỏi không cần thiết ở cuối câu. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và mạch lạc hơn, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác. Bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: When I was a child, it was difficult to visit the library because it was far from my home and I had no transport. However, I tried to go there two or three times a week to find my favorite comic books.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh nói về bản thân không liên quan. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ chính xác. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về thói quen đọc sách của trẻ em Trung Quốc.

Exemplo: Although I am not a Chinese kid, I have seen on TV that many Chinese children often go to the library to read books and find information to help with their studies and improve their skills.

× Well when I was a child I went to this for two or three times a week to find my favorite comics.

✓ Well, when I was a child, I went there two or three times a week to find my favorite comics.

The phrase 'went to this' is incorrect because 'this' is a demonstrative pronoun that does not refer to a place properly here. It should be replaced with 'there' to indicate the library. Also, 'for' is unnecessary before 'two or three times a week' because frequency expressions do not require 'for'.

× But now when I grow up day by day I find it's not interest in the library because the informations or any details I need actually other websites or on the Internet.

✓ But now, as I grow up day by day, I find it is not interesting to go to the library because the information or any details I need are actually on other websites or on the Internet.

The word 'interest' is a noun, but here an adjective 'interesting' is needed to describe the library. 'Informations' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and missing verbs; 'are' is needed before 'actually on other websites'.

× Actually, I usually go to library to study or read books widely, but sometimes I could compare the price of the books in the library with those on websites, because I believe that the online price would hire others have me to decide whether to buy books online or borrow it from the library.

✓ Actually, I usually go to the library to study or read books extensively, but sometimes I compare the prices of books in the library with those on websites, because I believe that the online prices help me decide whether to buy books online or borrow them from the library.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'Read books widely' is incorrect; 'read books extensively' or 'read a wide range of books' is better. 'Could compare' is better as 'compare' to express habitual action. 'Hire others have me' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'help me'. 'Borrow it' should be 'borrow them' because 'books' is plural. Also, 'price' should be plural 'prices' to match 'books'.

× When I was a child, it was quite difficult for me to visit the library because of the long distance.

✓ When I was a child, it was quite difficult for me to visit the library because of the long distance.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× However, I tried my best to go there two or three times a week, especially to find my favorite comics book Which?

✓ However, I tried my best to go there two or three times a week, especially to find my favorite comic books.

'Comics book' is incorrect; the correct term is 'comic books' (plural). The word 'Which?' at the end is unclear and unnecessary. The quantifier 'two or three times a week' is correct here.

× Oh actually I'm not a Chinese kid, but I have seen it on ATV show that Johnny kids is really into the reading book and they find that the ways for them to to find information for the studying or the way for them to sharpen their skill.

✓ Oh, actually I'm not a Chinese kid, but I have seen on an ATV show that Chinese kids are really into reading books and they find ways to find information for studying or ways to sharpen their skills.

'I have seen it on ATV show' is incorrect; 'it' is unnecessary and 'an' is needed before 'ATV show'. 'Johnny kids' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'Chinese kids'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'kids'. 'The reading book' should be 'reading books'. 'They find that the ways for them to to find information for the studying' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'they find ways to find information for studying'. 'The way for them to sharpen their skill' should be plural 'ways' and 'skills' to match plural subject.