Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add a supporting detail. Also, avoid redundancy like repeating 'library' multiple times unnecessarily. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

Exemplo: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. Moreover, I prefer reading books online rather than visiting a physical library.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases like 'peas or some white area'. Try to structure your answer clearly by stating what you do in the library and why. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid grammatical errors.

Exemplo: Although I don't often visit libraries, I sometimes go to my school library to study. It provides a quiet environment where I can focus on my academic books, which helps me gain confidence and learn more effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use past tense correctly and avoid repeating phrases like 'with my friends' twice. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I often went to the library with my friends and grandparents. However, I mostly went there to have fun rather than to read books.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' appropriately, and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, try to be more specific in your examples.

Exemplo: I believe Chinese kids often visit libraries because they enjoy reading and need resources for their assignments. For instance, I saw a TV series showing Chinese students spending a lot of time in libraries to learn about the world.

× Honestly, I do not often go to the library because in my area where I live there is no library, so that's why it's not possible for me to go any library to collect the information about anything, even though I also do not like to read the books in the library.

✓ Honestly, I do not often go to the library because in my area where I live there is no library, so that's why it's not possible for me to go to any library to collect information about anything, even though I also do not like to read books in the library.

The phrase 'go any library' is incorrect because the preposition 'to' is missing before 'any library'. The correct form is 'go to any library'. Also, 'the books' should be 'books' as it refers to books in general, not specific ones.

× As I earlier said I do not like to go library but sometimes if I want some peas or some white area then I prefer to go library that is in my school and I can easily go there because there is only one library that is available in my school and I read my academic books at there which helps me a lot to boost my confidence and I can easily get information about.

✓ As I said earlier, I do not like to go to the library but sometimes if I want some peace or some quiet area then I prefer to go to the library that is in my school and I can easily go there because there is only one library available in my school and I read my academic books there which helps me a lot to boost my confidence and I can easily get information.

The phrase 'go library' is incorrect; it should be 'go to the library' because 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place. 'At there' is incorrect; it should be 'there'. Also, 'peas' is a wrong word here; the intended word is 'peace'. 'White area' is unclear; 'quiet area' is more appropriate. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and removing unnecessary words.

× I vividly remember when I was a kid I go, I went to the library a lot with my friends but honestly I did not read books at there because I usually go there with my friends to enjoy with my friends and with my grandparents.

✓ I vividly remember when I was a kid I went to the library a lot with my friends but honestly I did not read books there because I usually went there with my friends to enjoy with my friends and with my grandparents.

The verb 'go' in 'I go' is incorrect in past tense context; it should be 'went'. Also, 'at there' is incorrect; it should be 'there'. The phrase 'usually go' should be 'usually went' to maintain past tense consistency.

× As far as my views are concerned, I firmly believe that Chinese kids often go to the library because they like to read a lot, so that's why they go there for reading books or to do their assignment projects. Moreover, I watch a series in which they shows that Chinese students spend most of their times in library to collect the information about the world.

✓ As far as my views are concerned, I firmly believe that Chinese kids often go to the library because they like to read a lot, so that's why they go there to read books or to do their assignment projects. Moreover, I watch a series in which they show that Chinese students spend most of their time in the library to collect information about the world.

The verb 'shows' should be 'show' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. 'Most of their times' should be 'most of their time' because 'time' is uncountable here. 'In library' should be 'in the library' because the definite article 'the' is needed before 'library'. 'For reading books' is better as 'to read books' for correct infinitive usage.