Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. For example, use 'the library' instead of 'library' and avoid redundancy like 'if I needed'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a calm and quiet place where I can concentrate better. Therefore, I usually study there during my examinations or whenever I need to focus.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'have the me time'. Also, be more specific about what you do in the library.

Exemplo: Generally, I study in the library; however, sometimes I go there to read books because it helps me concentrate fully and enjoy some quiet time.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains many fillers like 'umm' and 'uh'. Try to avoid these and complete your thoughts clearly. Also, use proper sentence structure and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Actually, during my childhood, there was no library near my school or home, so I couldn't visit one or enjoy books from there. However, after finishing school, I moved back to Dhaka where I started going to libraries.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear phrases like 'high chance of research, high sensor' and some grammar issues. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague terms. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: From what I know, Chinese parents value education highly and often encourage their children to visit libraries from a young age. This helps kids develop good study habits and improve their knowledge.

× Yes, I love to go to library and I enjoy studying there.

✓ Yes, I love to go to the library and I enjoy studying there.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect in this context.

× I think I can concentrate more in library because it's a very calm and quiet place so it's my go to place during my examination or any kind of study if I needed.

✓ I think I can concentrate more in the library because it's a very calm and quiet place, so it's my go-to place during my examinations or any kind of study if I need to.

Again, 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'go to' as an adjective phrase should be hyphenated as 'go-to'. The phrase 'if I needed' should be 'if I need to' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Generally I study in the library, but sometimes I go there to read a book because it in this way I can fully concentrate in my reading and have the me time there.

✓ Generally, I study in the library, but sometimes I go there to read a book because in this way I can fully concentrate on my reading and have some me time there.

The phrase 'it in this way' is incorrect; it should be 'in this way'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when used with 'concentrate'. 'The me time' is incorrect; it should be 'some me time' as 'me time' is an uncountable noun phrase.

× Umm, actually in my, uh, childhood, I didn't have any library nearby my school or my home, so I couldn't go there or enjoy any umm, books from the library.

✓ Umm, actually in my childhood, I didn't have any library near my school or my home, so I couldn't go there or enjoy any books from the library.

The phrase 'nearby my school' is incorrect; 'near' is the correct preposition here. Also, 'any umm, books' is acceptable but the filler 'umm' should be avoided for clarity.

× But what after my umm, completing my school, I came back to Dhaka and.

✓ But after completing my school, I came back to Dhaka.

The sentence is incomplete and contains unnecessary fillers like 'what' and 'umm'. Removing these and completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my knowledge, Chinese people are very cautious about their knowledge and degrees and certifications.

✓ To my knowledge, Chinese people are very cautious about their knowledge, degrees, and certifications.

The phrase 'In my knowledge' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To my knowledge'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list.

× So from the very beginning of the childhood they start sending their kids to the library.

✓ So from the very beginning of childhood, they start sending their kids to the library.

The phrase 'the childhood' is incorrect; 'childhood' is an uncountable noun and does not require 'the'. Adding a comma after 'childhood' improves sentence flow.

× So there is a high chance of research, high sensor.

✓ So there is a high chance of research and high scores.

The phrase 'high sensor' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. 'High scores' fits the context better. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete without a proper conjunction.