Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Instead of 'I everyday go', say 'I go to the library every day'. Also, avoid awkward tense usage like 'I have been completing' and 'I have been visiting'. Try to use simple past or present simple appropriately. Keep your answer concise and clear.

Exemplo: Yes, I go to the library every day. After finishing my daily tasks, I visit the library to read books and improve my knowledge.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. 'I usually go to the library for refreshment' is confusing. Instead, explain what activities you do there. Also, avoid asking the examiner questions. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library to read books about science and technology. I enjoy learning about new discoveries and developments in this field.

Sugestão: Your answer has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words like 'Cricket is Cricket is'. Use correct verb forms such as 'I preferred' instead of 'I'm a preferred'. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and coherent by using linking words.

Exemplo: No, I did not go to the library as a child because I preferred outdoor activities. Cricket was my favorite game, so I spent my free time playing cricket with my friends.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Use correct verb forms like 'usually go' instead of 'are usually go'. Also, avoid repetition such as 'to to the children'. Try to explain clearly and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, Chinese kids usually go to the library because the government encourages children to read books and gain knowledge.

× Yes, I everyday go to the library.

✓ Yes, I go to the library every day.

The adverb 'everyday' is incorrectly used; it should be 'every day' as two words to indicate frequency. Also, the adverb should be placed after the verb 'go' for correct word order in English.

× When I have been completing my task of the day, I have been visiting the library and gained my knowledge.

✓ When I complete my tasks of the day, I visit the library and gain knowledge.

The use of present perfect continuous 'have been completing' and 'have been visiting' is incorrect here because the sentence describes habitual actions. Simple present tense is appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'gained' should be in present tense 'gain' to match the habitual context.

× I usually go to the library for refreshment.

✓ I usually go to the library to refresh myself.

The phrase 'for refreshment' is awkward here; 'to refresh myself' is a more natural expression to indicate the purpose of going to the library.

× Are you interested in science related technology? So every day I am read the new books of science.

✓ Are you interested in science-related technology? Every day, I read new science books.

The question is fine but 'So' is incorrectly used to start the next sentence; it should be removed. 'Science related' should be hyphenated as 'science-related' as a compound adjective. 'I am read' is incorrect; simple present 'I read' is correct for habitual action. Also, 'the new books of science' is better as 'new science books'.

× No, when I was a child I was not going to the library because I'm a preferred to outdoor activities and cricket is Cricket is my favorite game.

✓ No, when I was a child I did not go to the library because I preferred outdoor activities and cricket was my favorite game.

The past tense should be used consistently: 'was not going' should be 'did not go' for simple past negative. 'I'm a preferred' is incorrect; it should be 'I preferred'. Also, 'cricket is Cricket is' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'cricket was' to maintain past tense.

× So in a in a spare time I would like to play cricket with my friends.

✓ So in my spare time, I liked to play cricket with my friends.

The phrase 'in a in a spare time' is incorrect; it should be 'in my spare time'. Also, 'would like to play' suggests present/future desire, but since the context is past, 'liked to play' is appropriate.

× Yes, Chinese kids are usually go to the library because his government also emphasize to to the children to the children go to the library and they gain the knowledge from the books.

✓ Yes, Chinese kids usually go to the library because their government also emphasizes children to go to the library and they gain knowledge from the books.

'Are usually go' is incorrect; it should be 'usually go' for subject-verb agreement. 'His government' is incorrect pronoun for 'Chinese kids'; it should be 'their government'. 'Emphasize to to the children to the children go' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'emphasizes children to go'. Also, 'gain the knowledge' is better as 'gain knowledge' without 'the'.