Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, a list is a good reminder for me when I'm shopping. I can save time just by looking at the list and quickly find the things that I want.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes. I do make list for my work is sometimes works when I try to. Stick to the list. But sometimes it depends on my emotional state. When I'm in bad mood, maybe I cannot stick to the list.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think it depends on peoples personality. Some people can complete their work perfectly even without a list because they have good memories and organizational skills, and others may find the lists useful because they can easily forget tasks without lists.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient for me. I just need to scroll on the screen and find the list. If I write my list, our paper I made like I may leave it somewhere and I don't know where it is.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 你的回答比较自然且有效,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容,比如说明你通常会列哪些东西,或者列清单的频率。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember essential items like groceries and household supplies. This way, I can shop efficiently and avoid forgetting anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议注意句子结构,避免重复和语法错误,同时可以用连接词使表达更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they usually help me stay organized. However, if I'm in a bad mood, I might find it harder to follow the list strictly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答内容较好,但可以用更准确的词汇和连接词来增强表达的逻辑性和自然度。
Exemplo: I believe it depends on people's personalities. Some individuals have excellent memories and organizational skills, so they don't need lists. On the other hand, others rely on lists to remember tasks because they tend to forget easily.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达错误,建议注意句子结构和用词准确性,同时可以增加一些细节说明为什么手机更方便。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can access it anytime. Unlike paper lists, which I might lose or forget, my phone keeps everything organized and easy to find.
× I do make list for my work is sometimes works when I try to.
✓ I do make lists for my work; it sometimes works when I try to.
这里的 'list' 应该用复数形式 'lists',因为通常工作中会有多个清单。'is sometimes works' 结构不正确,应改为 'it sometimes works',表示清单有时有效。
× I do make list for my work is sometimes works when I try to.
✓ I do make lists for my work; it sometimes works when I try to.
原句结构混乱,缺少连接词或标点,导致句子不通顺。应使用分号或连接词将两个独立分句连接起来。
× I do make list for my work is sometimes works when I try to.
✓ I do make lists for my work; it sometimes works when I try to.
'make list for my work' 中应使用复数 'lists',且 'for' 这里用法正确,无需更改。
× I do make list for my work is sometimes works when I try to.
✓ I do make lists for my work; it sometimes works when I try to.
句中缺少代词 'it' 来指代前面的 'lists',使句子完整。
× I think it depends on peoples personality.
✓ I think it depends on people's personality.
'peoples' 应为所有格形式 'people's',表示 '人们的'。
× I think it depends on peoples personality.
✓ I think it depends on people's personality.
需要使用所有格代词 'people's' 来表示所属关系。
× Some people can complete their work perfectly even without a list because they have good memories and organizational skills, and others may find the lists useful because they can easily forget tasks without lists.
✓ Some people can complete their work perfectly even without a list because they have good memories and organizational skills, and others may find lists useful because they can easily forget tasks without lists.
'the lists' 中的定冠词 'the' 不必要,复数名词 'lists' 前不需要冠词。
× If I write my list, our paper I made like I may leave it somewhere and I don't know where it is.
✓ If I write my list on paper, I may leave it somewhere and not know where it is.
'our paper' 应为 'on paper',表示写在纸上。原句中 'our' 用法错误。