List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid phrases like "kinda difficult" and "probably not anymore" which sound informal or vague. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually make a shopping list on my phone when I need to buy important or unusual items that are hard to remember. However, for regular weekly purchases, I don't find it necessary to make a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but you could improve coherence by using linking words and avoid repetition. Also, watch for small grammar mistakes such as 'Specially' which should be 'Especially'.

Exemplo: Yes, I find making a list very effective, especially on days when I have important tasks to complete. When I have a list, I can easily remember what I need to finish, but without it, I might forget crucial things.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat informal and slightly unclear. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague expressions like 'kinda' and 'probably'. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious and believe it might be ineffective if they forget to check it. Others may prefer relying on their good memory instead.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more fluent and concise. Avoid sentence fragments like 'To just writing it on a piece of paper' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it is more reliable. Since people usually carry their phones all the time, it's less likely to be lost compared to paper lists, which can easily be misplaced.

× I believe some people don't like making list because it's kinda tedious and they think that probably will be useless because maybe they'll forget it, unless if they are very sure of themselves that they have good memory and will never forget them.

✓ I believe some people don't like making lists because it's kinda tedious and they think that it probably will be useless because maybe they'll forget it, unless they are very sure of themselves that they have good memory and will never forget them.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists, not just one. Also, 'that probably will be useless' needs the pronoun 'it' to clarify the subject. Additionally, 'unless if' is incorrect; 'unless' alone is sufficient.

× I would probably make a list online notes in my phone.

✓ I would probably make a list or online notes on my phone.

The phrase 'online notes in my phone' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to something stored or accessed via a device like a phone. Also, 'a list online notes' is unclear; it should be 'a list or online notes'.

× Specially if that day I have to accomplish something really important.

✓ Especially if that day I have to accomplish something really important.

The word 'Specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'Especially' to indicate emphasis.

× To just writing it on a piece of paper because it is more reliable and.

✓ Rather than just writing it on a piece of paper because it is more reliable.

The phrase 'To just writing' is ungrammatical; it should be 'Rather than just writing' to correctly contrast the preference. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete.