List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'then then' and 'in the paper'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say, "I usually write it down on a piece of paper; however, when it's not convenient, I use my phone instead."

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop. I write it down on a piece of paper; however, if it's inconvenient, I use my phone to note the items. This helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit long and slightly unclear in parts. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'but' and 'so' properly. Also, avoid redundancy such as 'things I do'.

Exemplo: As a freelance artist, I don't usually make lists for my work. However, when I shop for art materials, I make a list to stay organized and avoid overspending.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good ideas but lacks clarity and contains informal phrases like 'And all of that.' Try to be more specific and use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' correctly. Also, avoid repeating 'some people' too often.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it confines them to a strict routine. They prefer flexibility and freedom in their daily activities. However, others find lists helpful for staying organized.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Also, avoid starting sentences with 'So' and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Make sure to finish your thoughts clearly.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of list. For groceries, I prefer writing on paper because it's easy to carry. However, for work-related lists, I use my phone so I can access them anytime and anywhere.

× I usually write it down in a piece of paper, but sometimes when it's not convenient for me to write it down in the paper, I then then to write it down in on my phone.

✓ I usually write it down on a piece of paper, but sometimes when it's not convenient for me to write it down on the paper, I then tend to write it down on my phone.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'a piece of paper' and 'the paper'. The correct preposition is 'on' because we write on the surface of the paper. Also, 'then then' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'then'. Nepali explanation: 'in' को सट्टा 'on' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ किनभने हामी कागजको सतहमा लेख्छौं। 'then then' दोहोरिएको छ, त्यसलाई 'then' मात्र लेख्नुपर्छ।

× I do tend to make a list for it so it can help me be on track of things and not spend more money on things I do.

✓ I do tend to make a list for it so it can help me stay on track with things and not spend more money on things I do.

The phrase 'be on track of things' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'stay on track with things'. 'Be on track of' is not idiomatic English. Nepali explanation: 'be on track of' गलत प्रयोग हो, सही वाक्यांश 'stay on track with' हो।

× Some people don't like making list because the list tends to confine the people in a more systematic manner.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because the list tends to confine people in a more systematic manner.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' after 'making' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists. Also, 'the people' is better as 'people' without 'the' in this context. Nepali explanation: 'list' लाई बहुवचन 'lists' बनाउनुपर्छ किनभने सामान्य रूपमा धेरै सूचीहरू बनाउने कुरा हो। 'the people' को सट्टा 'people' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× However, some people do like making the list.

✓ However, some people do like making lists.

Again, 'making the list' is incorrect because it refers to lists in general, so plural 'lists' is appropriate. Nepali explanation: सामान्य रूपमा सूचीहरू बनाउने कुरा भएकाले 'the list' को सट्टा 'lists' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× Well it depends on what I'm making a list of.

✓ Well, it depends on what I'm making a list of.

A comma is needed after 'Well' to separate the introductory word from the rest of the sentence. Nepali explanation: 'Well' पछि अल्पविराम राख्नुपर्छ ताकि वाक्य स्पष्ट हुन्छ।

× But when I'm trying to make a list for my work materials and generally prefer it on the phone so I can have it on the go an I don't.

✓ But when I'm trying to make a list for my work materials, I generally prefer it on the phone so I can have it on the go, and I don't.

The sentence is missing a subject before 'generally prefer' and has a typo 'an' instead of 'and'. Adding a comma and subject improves clarity. Nepali explanation: 'I' को अभाव छ र 'an' लाई 'and' मा सुधार गर्नुपर्छ। अल्पविरामले वाक्य स्पष्ट हुन्छ।