List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and unclear due to some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure correct grammar for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, without a list, I might purchase things that look appealing but aren't needed, which wastes money.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks completion and clarity. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid informal language like 'ur' and focus on clear, grammatically correct sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when I have deadlines. This helps me stay focused and ensures I complete tasks on time because I am constantly reminded of my schedule.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly by structuring your response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: I think it depends on personal preference. Some people prefer making lists on their phones, while others like using notepads. Therefore, the dislike for making lists varies from person to person.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by using proper sentence structure and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can update my list anytime and ensure I stick to my shopping schedule.

× Well it's depends on the availability of the time as most of the time I prefer to prepare a list before going on a shopping becauses if I go without it I will buy stuff that it looks good to the eyes but I don't want it in my daily routine which is a I think which I think is a waste of money so.

✓ Well it depends on the availability of time as most of the time I prefer to prepare a list before going shopping because if I go without it I will buy stuff that looks good to the eyes but I don't want it in my daily routine which I think is a waste of money.

The phrase 'it's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' is a verb that does not require 'it is' before it. The correct form is 'it depends'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The phrase 'going on a shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going shopping'. The clause 'that it looks good' should be 'that looks good' because 'that' is the subject of 'looks'. The phrase 'which is a I think which I think' is redundant and should be simplified to 'which I think'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do make a list for my work as well because if I have a schedule time or a deadline for a particular work so it will be helpful while ur doing the work because I have in my subconscious mind that I I need to complete this work on a particular time so. I prefer to.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work as well because if I have a scheduled time or a deadline for a particular task, it will be helpful while I am doing the work because I have in my subconscious mind that I need to complete this work on time, so I prefer to.

The phrase 'schedule time' should be 'scheduled time' to correctly describe the time as planned. 'Particular work' is better expressed as 'particular task' for clarity. 'While ur doing' is informal and incorrect; it should be 'while I am doing'. The phrase 'on a particular time' should be 'on time' or 'by a particular time'. The sentence ending with 'I prefer to.' is incomplete and should be connected properly. These corrections improve grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I is there a personal thing because some people do like to make a list on the phone while they were whatsoever, but some people make a list on their notepads as well, but they don't like to go over phone.

✓ It is a personal thing because some people like to make a list on the phone while others do not, but some people make a list on their notepads as well, and they don't like to use the phone for that.

The phrase 'I is there' is incorrect; it should be 'It is there' or better 'It is a personal thing'. 'While they were whatsoever' is unclear and incorrect; it should be replaced with a clearer phrase such as 'while others do not'. 'Go over phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'use the phone'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and improve clarity.

× I used to make it on a paper bus. Nowadays I like to I like my list to be on my phone because I I carry my phone everywhere so if somehow it happens I go to the shopping on schedule so I have my phone and what so ever I need I updated on my phone when I remember it.

✓ I used to make it on paper, but nowadays I like to have my list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere. So if somehow it happens that I go shopping on schedule, I have my phone and whatever I need is updated on my phone when I remember it.

The phrase 'on a paper bus' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper, but'. 'I like to I like my list to be' is repetitive and should be simplified to 'I like to have my list'. 'Go to the shopping on schedule' should be 'go shopping on schedule'. 'What so ever' should be 'whatever'. 'I updated on my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'is updated on my phone'. These corrections address past tense usage, article use, and sentence clarity.