List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors, making it hard to understand. Try to give a direct and simple response, then add a clear reason or example. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to make your answer natural and effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain why or why not. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I rely on my phone's calendar to keep track of my tasks, which works well for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to clearly state your opinion and support it with reasons using simple and correct language. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time, and sometimes they forget to bring the list with them, which makes it useless.

Sugestão: Your answer has many errors and is hard to follow. Try to answer directly and clearly, then explain your preference with specific reasons. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to make your answer natural and effective.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I don't forget my list like I might with paper notes.

× No, sometimes I make a list when I go for a shopper tote, a member, everything and known for cattle.

✓ No, sometimes I make a list when I go shopping for a tote, a number of items, everything, and known cattle.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronoun and noun usage, making it difficult to understand. 'Shopper tote' and 'a member' are incorrect or unclear phrases. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by replacing 'shopper tote' with 'shopping for a tote' and 'a member' with 'a number of items'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But my mother says to carry me at remarketing.

✓ But my mother tells me to carry it when shopping.

The phrase 'carry me at remarketing' is incorrect and unclear. The pronoun 'me' is misused here; it should refer to the object being carried, not the person. 'Remarketing' is likely a mishearing or miswriting of 'marketing' or 'shopping'. The correction uses 'tells me to carry it when shopping' to convey the intended meaning clearly and correctly.

× No, I don't make any list for my work because I have another suitable also and sometimes I forgot to remember my timetable and with that I cannot sometime a penny list for my work.

✓ No, I don't make any list for my work because I have another schedule, and sometimes I forget to remember my timetable, so I cannot sometimes make a proper list for my work.

The original sentence has multiple issues including incorrect quantifiers ('another suitable'), verb tense errors ('forgot' instead of 'forget'), and unclear phrases ('a penny list'). The correction replaces 'another suitable' with 'another schedule', corrects verb tenses, and clarifies the meaning by using 'make a proper list'. This improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Well firstly it's append on person to person choice of putting to me they don't like her because of her waste of time and sometimes they forgot to list at home and it a waste of time.

✓ Well, firstly, it depends on person-to-person choice; for me, they don't like it because it's a waste of time, and sometimes they forget to make a list at home, which is a waste of time.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('append on' instead of 'depends on'), pronouns ('her' instead of 'it'), and has unclear structure. The correction uses the correct preposition 'depends on', replaces incorrect pronouns with 'it', and clarifies the sentence structure for better understanding.

× Well, I don't make any list but whenever I make any list, only time I preferred to make a list on mobile phone because I never forgot my mom by phone at home.

✓ Well, I don't make any list, but whenever I make one, I prefer to make it on my mobile phone because I never forget my phone at home.

The original sentence misuses pronouns ('my mom by phone') and verb tenses ('preferred' instead of 'prefer'). The correction replaces 'my mom by phone' with 'my phone', corrects verb tense to present simple 'prefer', and improves clarity.

× And I think if I make any paper notice list and only time I forgot at home under don't remember anything there.

✓ And I think if I make any paper list, I often forget it at home and don't remember anything there.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing ('paper notice list', 'only time I forgot at home under'). The correction simplifies the phrase to 'paper list', corrects verb tense to present simple 'forget', and clarifies the meaning.

× So there's a reason I used to mobile phone to make any list.

✓ So that's the reason I use my mobile phone to make any list.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'used to' which implies past habit, but the context suggests present habit. Also, 'used to mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use my mobile phone'. The correction fixes verb tense and pronoun usage for clarity and correctness.