List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to shopping.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organised and saves time. I usually categorise items by sections, which makes the process quicker and more efficient.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but fragmented and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and specific examples to support your points.

Exemplo: As a nurse, I find making lists essential to stay organised and focused. Since my job involves prioritising many tasks, notes help me avoid forgetting important duties throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and detailed. Avoid vague phrases like 'short memory' and explain reasons more clearly. Use linking words to structure your answer better.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, believing they can remember tasks without writing them down. Others might find lists restrictive or time-consuming to create.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve coherence. Also, clarify your preferences with specific reasons.

Exemplo: I use both paper and my phone for lists. At work, I prefer paper because mobile phones aren't allowed, but for online shopping or groceries, I usually use my phone for convenience.

× Listing things to buy is very essential specially when you are a busy person like me.

✓ Listing things to buy is very essential especially when you are a busy person like me.

The word 'specially' is used to mean 'in a special manner', but the correct word here is 'especially', which means 'particularly' or 'above all'. This is a common confusion between the two adverbs.

× Specially the job requires a lot of prioritization of tasks.

✓ Especially the job requires a lot of prioritization of tasks.

Again, 'especially' should be used instead of 'specially' to indicate emphasis or particular importance in this context.

× Being a nurse. Making a note. Is very important in order to stay organized and focused.

✓ Being a nurse, making a note is very important in order to stay organized and focused.

The original sentence is fragmented into incomplete sentences. Combining them into one sentence with appropriate punctuation improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I think it's simply because they have a short memory to remember whatever they need to do and what the things they need to buy in the groceries.

✓ I think it's simply because they have a short memory to remember whatever they need to do and the things they need to buy in the groceries.

The phrase 'what the things they need to buy' is incorrect. It should be 'the things they need to buy' to avoid redundancy and incorrect pronoun use.

× It's both actually work.

✓ Both actually work.

The phrase 'It's both actually work' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'Both actually work' to indicate that both options function well.

× But if I'm doing my online shopping or making a list to go to the grocery. Are usually use my phone.

✓ But if I'm doing my online shopping or making a list to go to the grocery, I usually use my phone.

The original sentences are fragmented and missing the subject in the second sentence. Combining them and adding the subject 'I' corrects the sentence structure.