Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I preferred so make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things when I actually get to the supermarket's so I. Like to make a list in at once.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
I like to make a list for my work and it does work for me because every day I have lots of work to do, so sometimes I'm getting a little bit confused. So I'd like to make things in order.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe because making a list can? Makes him feel so stressed. Making a list for them is just like a reminder. To complete the menu task. It will create a sense of responsibility and.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I actually preferred to make a list on my phone because I can carry it. With me all the time. Anywhere I can check on my phone to see what it is exactly I need to do so this.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“preferred so make a list”应为“prefer to make a list”。建议注意动词时态和句子结构,使表达更流畅自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things once I get to the supermarket. So, I like to prepare my list all at once before I go.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中表达有些重复且句子结构不够清晰,如“I'm getting a little bit confused”应为“I get a little confused”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并注意时态一致。
Exemplo: Yes, I like to make a list for my work because I have a lot to do every day. Sometimes I get a little confused, so making a list helps me organize my tasks better.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不连贯。建议完整表达观点,使用连词连接句子,并避免语法错误。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it can make them feel stressed. For them, a list is a reminder of many tasks, which creates a sense of responsibility that they might find overwhelming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中时态使用不当,如“preferred”应为“prefer”,句子断裂影响流畅性。建议使用完整句子并注意时态一致。
Exemplo: I actually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry it with me all the time. This way, I can check exactly what I need to do wherever I am.
× Yes, I preferred so make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things when I actually get to the supermarket's so I.
✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things when I actually get to the supermarket, so I.
这里的动词时态错误,'preferred'是过去式,但句子描述的是习惯性动作,应使用一般现在时'prefer'。另外,'so make a list'应改为不定式'to make a list'。超市的所有格'supermarket's'使用错误,应去掉。
× I like to make a list for my work and it does work for me because every day I have lots of work to do, so sometimes I'm getting a little bit confused.
✓ I like to make a list for my work and it does work for me because every day I have lots of work to do, so sometimes I get a little bit confused.
'I'm getting'使用了现在进行时,但这里描述的是经常发生的状态,应使用一般现在时'get'。
× Maybe because making a list can? Makes him feel so stressed.
✓ Maybe because making a list can make them feel so stressed.
句中'can?'后面不应有问号,且'makes him'主语不明确,改为'them'更符合泛指。
× Making a list for them is just like a reminder. To complete the menu task.
✓ Making a list for them is just like a reminder to complete the main task.
句子断开成两部分,导致结构不完整,应合并为一句完整句子。'menu task'应为'main task',更符合语境。
× I actually preferred to make a list on my phone because I can carry it. With me all the time.
✓ I actually prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry it with me all the time.
'preferred'应为一般现在时'prefer','carry it. With me'不应断句,应连成一句。