Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. I make a list when I go for a shopping or grocery. These things remind me what things I want to take or not as well as it gave me for a a vestige of money as well as maintain the my time.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. I make a list of my work in the daily basis or mobile phone an the in the morning time I make a list from which things I want to do in the daily races or a regular basis an and these things are very useful in my life and because it's definitely work.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
You girls each and every person have their own twice or a task and some people don't want don't want to make a list of their work because they think that and this is a very time consuming method or a very waste of time and they think that we are we are reminded her work early.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Well, I usually prefer to make our list on a wild phone because this boyfriend is a harvest with me L as well as if we rearrange over a task or a rewrite of our task as well as we also sent over a task or a work to our friend.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'a vestige of money'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and also saves me money and time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why making lists works for you.
Exemplo: Yes, I make a daily to-do list on my mobile phone every morning because it helps me organise my tasks and increases my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. For example, say 'Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary.'
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they prefer to remember tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many mistakes. Try to use simple and correct sentences. Explain your preference clearly and give reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'also'.
Exemplo: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit or share my tasks with friends.
× I make a list when I go for a shopping or grocery.
✓ I make a list when I go shopping or grocery shopping.
The phrase 'go for a shopping or grocery' is incorrect. In English, we say 'go shopping' or 'go grocery shopping' without the preposition 'for' and without the article 'a'. This is a common prepositional error.
× These things remind me what things I want to take or not as well as it gave me for a a vestige of money as well as maintain the my time.
✓ These things remind me of what I want to buy or not, and they help me save some money as well as manage my time.
The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and awkward phrasing. 'Remind me what things I want to take or not' should be 'remind me of what I want to buy or not'. Also, 'it gave me for a a vestige of money' is incorrect; it should be 'help me save some money'. 'Maintain the my time' is incorrect; it should be 'manage my time'.
× I make a list of my work in the daily basis or mobile phone an the in the morning time I make a list from which things I want to do in the daily races or a regular basis an and these things are very useful in my life and because it's definitely work.
✓ I make a list of my work on a daily basis on my mobile phone, and in the morning I make a list of the things I want to do daily or regularly, and these lists are very useful in my life because they definitely work.
The phrase 'in the daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Mobile phone an the in the morning time' is confusing; it should be 'on my mobile phone, and in the morning'. 'Make a list from which things I want to do' should be 'make a list of the things I want to do'. 'Daily races' is incorrect; it should be 'daily tasks' or 'daily activities'. 'Because it's definitely work' should be 'because they definitely work'.
× You girls each and every person have their own twice or a task and some people don't want don't want to make a list of their work because they think that and this is a very time consuming method or a very waste of time and they think that we are we are reminded her work early.
✓ Each and every person has their own tasks, and some people don't want to make a list of their work because they think it is a very time-consuming method or a waste of time, and they think that we are reminded of our work early.
'You girls each and every person' is incorrect and unnecessary; it should be 'Each and every person'. 'Twice or a task' is incorrect; it should be 'tasks'. 'Don't want don't want' is a repetition error. 'They think that and this is' is incorrect; it should be 'they think it is'. 'Very waste of time' should be 'a waste of time'. 'We are reminded her work early' is incorrect; it should be 'we are reminded of our work early'.
× Well, I usually prefer to make our list on a wild phone because this boyfriend is a harvest with me L as well as if we rearrange over a task or a rewrite of our task as well as we also sent over a task or a work to our friend.
✓ Well, I usually prefer to make my list on my phone because this phone is handy for me, and I can rearrange or rewrite my tasks, as well as send my tasks or work to my friends.
'Make our list on a wild phone' is incorrect; it should be 'make my list on my phone'. 'This boyfriend is a harvest with me L' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'this phone is handy for me'. 'If we rearrange over a task or a rewrite of our task' should be 'I can rearrange or rewrite my tasks'. 'We also sent over a task or a work to our friend' should be 'I can send my tasks or work to my friends'. Pronouns and word choices were incorrect and confusing.