List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Whenever I go shopping, I usually make a list because I tend to forget things easily. This helps me remember everything I need and also saves time by preventing me from buying unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Your answer is short and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'depends on time' without explanation.

Exemplo: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to work spontaneously. However, sometimes I make a list when I have many tasks to organise my time better.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Use correct vocabulary ('list' instead of 'lift') and avoid repetition. Provide a clear reason with linking words.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it is time-consuming and a waste of time, especially when they are in a hurry.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct verb tenses and clarify your points. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Unlike paper lists, phone lists are easy to check anytime and less likely to be lost or misplaced.

× Whenever I go for shop, I usually make a list 'cause I tend to forgot things easily and have a little helps me remember everything I need.

✓ Whenever I go shopping, I usually make a list 'cause I tend to forget things easily and have a little help to remember everything I need.

The phrase 'go for shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' which uses the verb in the present participle form (Grammar Problem Type ID:10). 'Tend to forgot' is wrong because after 'tend to' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'forget' is correct (Grammar Problem Type ID:9). 'Have a little helps' is incorrect because 'helps' is singular but 'a little' refers to an uncountable noun; it should be 'a little help' (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). Also, 'help' should be in base form as it is a noun here.

× It also saves my time and prevented me from buying unnecessary items.

✓ It also saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

The sentence mixes present tense 'saves' with past tense 'prevented'. To maintain tense consistency, both verbs should be in present tense: 'saves' and 'prevents' (Grammar Problem Type ID:5). Also, 'saves my time' is better expressed as 'saves me time'.

× Actually I don't make list for work 'cause I want to work according to my mind.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list for work 'cause I want to work according to my mind.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list' (Grammar Problem Type ID:22). Also, 'according to my mind' is awkward; however, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, the article correction suffices here.

× It depends on time. Whenever I want to.

✓ It depends on the time. I do it whenever I want to.

The sentence 'It depends on time.' is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'the' before 'time' makes it specific (Grammar Problem Type ID:22). The fragment 'Whenever I want to.' is incomplete and should be connected to a main clause to form a complete sentence (Grammar Problem Type ID:23).

× I think some of the people think that making a lift, it can be time consuming or time taking and it also.

✓ I think some people think that making a list can be time-consuming or time-taking, and it also wastes time.

'Some of the people' is better as 'some people' for natural usage (Grammar Problem Type ID:12). 'Making a lift' is a typo; it should be 'making a list'. The phrase 'it can be time consuming or time taking and it also.' is incomplete and needs completion for clarity. 'Time-consuming' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective (Grammar Problem Type ID:13).

× Whenever I have to make list, I preferred to make that list on my phone 'cause whenever I make list on people there are many chances of. Forwarding that that and on phone.

✓ Whenever I have to make a list, I prefer to make that list on my phone 'cause whenever I make a list on paper, there are many chances of forwarding it, and on phone, you can always check whenever you want.

'Make list' needs the article 'a' before 'list' (Grammar Problem Type ID:22). 'Preferred' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'prefer' (Grammar Problem Type ID:5). 'Make list on people' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list on paper' (Grammar Problem Type ID:12). The sentence fragment 'there are many chances of. Forwarding that that' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'there are many chances of forwarding it' (Grammar Problem Type ID:23).