List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, say "Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stay focused and buy only what I need."

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me stay focused and buy only what I need.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear words and repetition. Use precise vocabulary and avoid repeating words. Also, explain briefly how making lists helps your work. For example, "Yes, I make notes or reminders to organize my tasks better, which helps me work more efficiently."

Exemplo: Yes, I make notes or reminders to organize my tasks better, which helps me work more efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is too short and does not address the question well. Try to speculate or give possible reasons why some people dislike making lists. For example, "Some people might find making lists boring or time-consuming, so they prefer to remember things mentally."

Exemplo: Some people might find making lists boring or time-consuming, so they prefer to remember things mentally.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' in formal speaking. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient than using paper, which requires a pen or pencil."

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient than using paper, which requires a pen or pencil.

× I make at least when I show up becauses I want to make my targeting more clearly.

✓ I make a list at least when I show up because I want to make my targeting clearer.

The phrase 'make at least' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'make a list'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'More clearly' is an adverb, but here an adjective 'clearer' is needed to modify 'targeting'. Also, 'targeting' is a noun here, so 'clearer' is appropriate.

× I make at least when I show up becauses I want to make my targeting more clearly.

✓ I make a list at least when I show up because I want to make my targeting clearer.

The phrase 'make at least' is missing the object 'a list'. Also, 'more clearly' should be 'clearer' to correctly modify the noun 'targeting'.

× On yes I do.

✓ Oh yes, I do.

'On' is a typo or incorrect word here; it should be 'Oh' as an interjection expressing affirmation.

× I make some nose or reminder because I want to work work more logically and I think it is useful.

✓ I make some notes or reminders because I want to work more logically and I think it is useful.

'Nose' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'notes'. 'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match 'some'. The repeated word 'work work' is a typo and should be a single 'work'.

× I make some nose or reminder because I want to work work more logically and I think it is useful.

✓ I make some notes or reminders because I want to work more logically and I think it is useful.

The phrase 'some nose or reminder' is incorrect; 'notes' and 'reminders' are the correct nouns. Also, 'work work' is a repetition error.

× I don't know. And I only know why I like making these, I don't know others.

✓ I don't know. I only know why I like making these; I don't know why others do.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be avoided. The sentence is a run-on; it should be split or connected properly. Also, 'I don't know others' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't know why others do'.

× I don't know. And I only know why I like making these, I don't know others.

✓ I don't know. I only know why I like making these; I don't know why others do.

The sentence contains a comma splice and improper conjunction use. It should be split into two sentences or connected with a semicolon. Also, 'I don't know others' is incomplete and needs clarification.

× I prefer make a list on my phone 'cause if I make a list on paper, I require a pencil or pen, which is not convenient at all.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I make a list on paper, I need a pencil or pen, which is not convenient at all.

After 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to make' is required, not the bare verb 'make'. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate. 'Require' is too formal and uncommon here; 'need' is better.