List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和句子结构的正确使用，同时避免无关信息。可以简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体细节支持。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. This helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves time.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整，建议注意时态一致和句子完整性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently and prevents me from forgetting important duties.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by the number of tasks. For example, a busy person might find it discouraging to write down everything they need to do.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法和表达混乱的问题，建议简化句子，注意语法正确，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient. I can add notes anytime and anywhere, even when commuting, and my phone also has reminders to help me stay organized.

× Yes I have.

✓ Yes, I do.

这里的回答是对一般现在时的提问，应该用助动词do而不是have。'Yes, I have'通常用于完成时态的回答。

× I've been practicing making shopping list for a couple months before.

✓ I've been practicing making shopping lists for a couple of months.

'a couple months'缺少介词of，且shopping list应为复数形式。'before'在现在完成进行时中不合适，应去掉。

× making shopping list

✓ making shopping lists

shopping list应为复数形式，因为表示多次制作购物清单。

× Before that I never made a shopping list when I went to the supermarket.

✓ Before that, I never made a shopping list when I went to the supermarket.

句子结构正确，但缺少逗号，建议加上以增强可读性。

× I just brought something look attractive and brought them home.

✓ I just bought something that looked attractive and brought it home.

'brought'应为'bought'，表示购买。'look'应为过去式'looked'，因为描述过去的状态。'something'是单数，后面应使用单数代词'it'。

× However, I've retired.

✓ However, I've changed.

'retired'意为退休，语境不符，应该用'changed'或其他合适词汇。

× I always make A to do list for my work

✓ I always make a to-do list for my work

'to do list'应为复合名词'to-do list'，且冠词'a'应小写。

× Not only that, it kept my work more organized and tidy, but also prevent me from forgetting and.

✓ Not only does it keep my work more organized and tidy, but it also prevents me from forgetting things.

时态应为现在时，主谓一致需要调整。'prevent'应为'prevents'，且句尾不应以'and'结尾，应补充完整。

× some people don't like making this because they have too many things to do during a day.

✓ some people don't like making lists because they have too many things to do during the day.

'this'指代不明确，应改为'lists'。'during a day'应为'during the day'。

× this dressed for example, a person or basic.

✓ this is stressful, for example, for a person who is basic.

原句语法混乱，'dressed'应为'stressed'或'stressful'，且句子结构不完整。

× Especially the basic person might find is discouraging to write down every things they need to do for a day where.

✓ Especially a basic person might find it discouraging to write down everything they need to do for a day.

'is'缺少主语，应为'it'。'every things'应为'everything'。句尾'where'多余，应删除。

× I prefer making list on my phone not only 'cause making notes on phones can be more convenience that which means that you can make any make notes at any time for any positions even in even when you commuting in the subways, but also the phones not also have the reminder.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone not only because making notes on phones can be more convenient, which means that you can make notes at any time and in any place, even when you are commuting on the subway, but also because phones have reminders.

'convenience'应为形容词'convenient'。'any positions'应为'any place'。'even when you commuting'应为'even when you are commuting'。'phones not also have'应为'because phones have'。句子结构混乱，需调整。