List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达不够连贯，句子结构不完整，且缺少连接词。建议练习使用完整句子，并用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually use the Notes app on my iPhone to make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need.

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达含糊。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并解释原因，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I like to use the Notes app for work, but sometimes it doesn't work well because my tasks often change unexpectedly.

Sugestão: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and spontaneity.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态和连词，使回答更流畅。

Exemplo: As I mentioned before, I usually use my phone to make lists because it is environmentally friendly and very convenient.

× Yes, I usually use the notes. Which is. Apple Phone apps. To make a list.

✓ Yes, I usually use the Notes app on my iPhone to make a list.

原句中断句不完整，且表达不清晰。应将碎片句合并为完整句子，使用正确的名词短语表达“苹果手机应用程序”。建议将“Apple Phone apps”改为“Notes app on my iPhone”，使句子通顺且符合英语表达习惯。

× Yes, I would like to use the notes. When I was doing my job. But I didn't think it was work because there is some, uh, there's a lot of change an. Something was different.

✓ Yes, I liked to use the Notes when I was doing my job. But I didn't think it worked because there were some changes and something was different.

原句中时态混乱，前半句用“would like”表达过去习惯不准确，应使用过去时“liked”。“didn't think it was work”应改为“didn't think it worked”，因为这里指的是“它起作用”。“there is some”应改为过去时“there were some”，保持时态一致。

× I think some people were felt there was. Being restricted by using. But now it's for making list.

✓ I think some people felt they were being restricted by using lists. But now it's for making lists.

原句中“were felt”错误，动词“felt”不应与“were”连用，应直接用过去式“felt”。“there was”后缺少主语，应改为“they were”。“being restricted by using”后应明确宾语，改为“being restricted by using lists”。最后一句“making list”应为复数“making lists”。

× Ask the first question of my answer. I will usually used the phone to make list because it was environmentally friendly and. Conveniently.

✓ As I answered the first question, I usually use the phone to make lists because it is environmentally friendly and convenient.

“will usually used”时态错误，应为一般现在时“usually use”，因为表达习惯动作。句首“Ask the first question of my answer”表达不清，应改为“As I answered the first question”。“make list”应为复数“make lists”。“was environmentally friendly and conveniently”时态和词性错误，应为“is environmentally friendly and convenient”，形容词修饰。