List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide clear supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to make your response more natural and effective.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember what I need. Moreover, I like to explore new brands and try products before buying them, which helps me decide better.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by clearer sentence structure and better linking words. Try to organise your ideas logically and use specific examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Sometimes I make a list for my work because it helps me organise tasks. However, I avoid making long lists as they can feel overwhelming. Instead, I focus on completing one task at a time, which improves my productivity.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid grammatical mistakes to make your response more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it creates pressure and stress. Additionally, they prefer to act freely without constantly thinking about unfinished tasks, which is why they avoid lists.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by clearer sentence structure and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy for a more natural response.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better. In contrast, when I type lists on my phone, I often forget about them, so paper works best for me.

× No, I don't make a list when I shop because I kept in mind, but I have to buy an I saw the place how what kind of stuff that are available in that area that new stoves.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I keep in mind what I have to buy and I see the place to know what kind of stuff is available in that area, like new stoves.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'kept' (past tense) instead of 'keep' (present tense) because the action is habitual. Also, 'I saw' should be 'I see' to match the present tense context. Using correct tense ensures clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× No, I don't make a list when I shop because I kept in mind, but I have to buy an I saw the place how what kind of stuff that are available in that area that new stoves.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop because I keep in mind what I have to buy and I see the place to know what kind of stuff is available in that area, like new stoves.

The phrase 'stuff that are available' is incorrect because 'stuff' is singular and should be followed by 'is' instead of 'are'. Correct subject-verb agreement is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× I like to buy like knew brands and strive them.

✓ I like to buy new brands and try them.

The word 'strive' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'try'. Also, 'knew' is a past tense of 'know' but the intended word is 'new' (adjective). Using the correct verb and adjective improves sentence clarity.

× You know, a trial method that you can trust something by using it first.

✓ You know, a trial method where you can trust something by using it first.

The phrase 'a trial method that you can trust something' is awkward. Using 'where' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'using' is correctly used as a gerund here.

× Sometimes I make a list when I work, but sometimes I do not because I think by making a list you we're overburdening ourselves by telling us that you have so much work to do, but if you could keep it 1 by 1, it will help us to achieve it in a great way and not by overburdening us.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I work, but sometimes I do not because I think by making a list you are overburdening yourself by telling yourself that you have so much work to do. But if you could keep it one by one, it will help you achieve it in a better way and not overburden you.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage ('you we're' should be 'you are'), inconsistent pronouns ('us' and 'you'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns and verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I make a list when I work, but sometimes I do not because I think by making a list you we're overburdening ourselves by telling us that you have so much work to do, but if you could keep it 1 by 1, it will help us to achieve it in a great way and not by overburdening us.

✓ Sometimes I make a list when I work, but sometimes I do not because I think by making a list you are overburdening yourself by telling yourself that you have so much work to do. But if you could keep it one by one, it will help you achieve it in a better way and not overburden you.

The original sentence mixes 'you', 'us', and 'ourselves' incorrectly. Consistent use of pronouns referring to the same subject is necessary for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Some people don't like to make list as they avoid a pressure and over whelming's things and they try to be a person that they can do anything they want to but not taking a step back to think what pending work will be remain if they do not go through their list.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists as they avoid pressure and overwhelming things, and they try to be the kind of person who can do anything they want but do not take a step back to think about what pending work will remain if they do not go through their list.

The phrase 'a pressure' is incorrect because 'pressure' is uncountable and should not have 'a'. Also, 'over whelming's things' is incorrect; it should be 'overwhelming things'. Correct quantifier usage is important for grammatical correctness.

× Some people don't like to make list as they avoid a pressure and over whelming's things and they try to be a person that they can do anything they want to but not taking a step back to think what pending work will be remain if they do not go through their list.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists as they avoid pressure and overwhelming things, and they try to be the kind of person who can do anything they want but do not take a step back to think about what pending work will remain if they do not go through their list.

The phrase 'a person that they can do anything' is awkward. It should be 'the kind of person who can do anything'. Also, 'will be remain' is incorrect; 'will remain' is correct. Proper pronoun and verb usage improves clarity.

× Some people don't like to make list as they avoid a pressure and over whelming's things and they try to be a person that they can do anything they want to but not taking a step back to think what pending work will be remain if they do not go through their list.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists as they avoid pressure and overwhelming things, and they try to be the kind of person who can do anything they want but do not take a step back to think about what pending work will remain if they do not go through their list.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general action of making lists. Correct singular/plural usage is necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to make a list on paper as I love that when I write my brain stimulus reacted in notes app.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I love that when I write, my brain is stimulated, unlike in the notes app.

The phrase 'my brain stimulus reacted in notes app' is incorrect. It should be 'my brain is stimulated' and 'in the notes app' with the definite article. Correct preposition and article usage improves sentence clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on paper as I love that when I write my brain stimulus reacted in notes app.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I love that when I write, my brain is stimulated, unlike in the notes app.

The phrase 'in notes app' requires the definite article 'the' before 'notes app' because it refers to a specific app. Using the definite article correctly is important for grammatical accuracy.

× I don't like that much because sometimes I just type and forget about it.

✓ I don't like it much because sometimes I just type and forget about it.

The phrase 'I don't like that much' is incomplete; it should be 'I don't like it much' to correctly refer to the previous idea. Proper sentence structure ensures clarity.

× When I make a list and paper I remember it more as it helps me to think that it's some kind of thing appointed at that's why make it on paper.

✓ When I make a list on paper, I remember it more as it helps me think that it's something important. That's why I make it on paper.

The original sentence has missing prepositions ('on paper'), awkward phrasing ('some kind of thing appointed at'), and missing subjects ('that's why make it'). Correct sentence structure and word choice improve clarity and grammatical correctness.