List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Try to start with a direct response, then explain why you make a list when shopping. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for better clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. This way, I avoid buying unnecessary items and save time. For example, last week I bought only the things on my list and finished shopping quickly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but needs better clarity and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'so' properly. Avoid unclear phrases like 'old travel through'. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when I have many tasks. For example, during my board exams, I listed important formulas and concepts to study. This helped me revise efficiently and stay organized.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and directly. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons. Avoid repeating words and unclear phrases. Keep your answer focused and concise.

Exemplo: Some people do not like making lists because they feel it adds pressure to their mind. They prefer to keep their thoughts free and not be restricted by a list.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why. Use simple and correct sentences. Avoid unclear words like 'chat and knee' and 'mcalister's'. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing by hand is easier and faster for me. Using a phone can be complicated and take more time due to typing and navigating apps.

× Well, absolutely I make a list of the products that I needed becaused it tells me a lot.

✓ Well, absolutely I make a list of the products that I need because it tells me a lot.

The verb 'needed' is in past tense but the context requires present tense 'need' because the student is talking about a habitual action. Also, 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'.

× It helps in a way that when you are going to buy your mind got confused and you are and you are not by a one thing and you buy a forcing At that time the list place important role.

✓ It helps in a way that when you are going to buy, your mind gets confused and you do not buy one thing but buy many things. At that time, the list plays an important role.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Got confused' should be 'gets confused' to match present tense. 'You are and you are not by a one thing' is unclear and corrected to 'you do not buy one thing but buy many things'. 'Buy a forcing' is unclear and removed. 'The list place important role' corrected to 'the list plays an important role'.

× So we should Boyer a very important product in a very beneficial and efficient way for.

✓ So we should buy very important products in a very beneficial and efficient way.

'Boyer' is a typo for 'buy'. 'A very important product' changed to plural 'products' to match context. 'In a very beneficial and efficient way for' is incorrect; 'for' is unnecessary and removed.

× I usually make a list when, when, whenever I am in trouble.

✓ I usually make a list whenever I am in trouble.

Repetition of 'when' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× For example, recently I was giving my board exam so I was in a old travel through how to learn the formulas and other concepts.

✓ For example, recently I was giving my board exam so I was going through how to learn the formulas and other concepts.

'In a old travel through' is incorrect; corrected to 'going through' to express the process of studying.

× So I make a list of this which helped me a lot and I revised it in a very efficient.

✓ So I made a list of this which helped me a lot and I revised it very efficiently.

'Make' should be past tense 'made' to match past context. 'In a very efficient' is incorrect; corrected to 'very efficiently' (adverb).

× Well, I never thought about it because the list is the one of the important thing is to do any work, for example for a shopping and for studying for an an any field.

✓ Well, I never thought about it because the list is one of the important things to do any work, for example shopping, studying, or any field.

'The one of the important thing is' is incorrect; corrected to 'one of the important things'. 'For a shopping' changed to 'shopping'. 'For an an any field' corrected to 'or any field'.

× But the I, I think that the some people do not like making list because it takes the burden on their mind.

✓ But I think that some people do not like making lists because it takes a burden on their mind.

Removed extra 'the' before 'I'. 'The some people' corrected to 'some people'. 'Making list' corrected to plural 'making lists'. 'Takes the burden' changed to 'takes a burden' for correct article usage.

× They think that it is a burden so they kept their mind fresh.

✓ They think that it is a burden so they keep their mind fresh.

'Kept' is past tense; context requires present tense 'keep'.

× In my perception I prefer to make a list on paper becaused on paper we should like we should write in a very easy way becaused we should write and if anybody pencil an any pen on the other end on mobile there need a lot of chat and knee and it is a time consuming.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to make a list on paper because on paper we can write in a very easy way. If anybody has a pencil or a pen, it is easier than on mobile where there is a lot of typing and it is time consuming.

'In my perception' corrected to 'In my opinion'. 'Becaused' corrected to 'because'. The sentence was fragmented and unclear; restructured for clarity. 'Should like we should write' corrected to 'we can write'. 'Anybody pencil an any pen' corrected to 'anybody has a pencil or a pen'. 'There need a lot of chat and knee' corrected to 'there is a lot of typing'. 'Time consuming' corrected to 'time-consuming'.

× So I think that the mcalister's paper is very different.

✓ So I think that making lists on paper is very different.

'Mcalister's paper' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'making lists on paper' to fit context.