List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I only buy essential items that I need at home. However, if I plan to buy many things, I sometimes prepare a list to avoid forgetting anything.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for better flow. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you in your work.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organise my tasks efficiently. For example, by following my timetable, I can complete all important duties on time and avoid wasting the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously. Moreover, since many items are displayed openly in the market, they feel they can remember what to buy without writing it down.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can easily get lost. Also, having the list on my phone allows me to access it instantly while shopping, which is very convenient.

× When I go to shop, I didn't make that list because I only carry earn necessary things which. Needed at home.

✓ When I go shopping, I don't make a list because I only carry necessary things which are needed at home.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Didn't make' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'don't make' is appropriate. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' as a common expression. 'Carry earn necessary things which. Needed at home.' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'carry necessary things which are needed at home.' to form a correct relative clause.

× Yeah, yes, I make a list for my work becauses through that timetable I could work properly.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because through that timetable I can work properly.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'could' suggests past ability, but the context is present habitual action, so 'can' is appropriate.

× If I don't make my list of my work, that day was wasted by myself.

✓ If I don't make my list of my work, that day is wasted by me.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. The conditional 'If I don't make' is present tense, so the result clause should also be present tense: 'that day is wasted'. Also, 'by myself' is incorrect here; 'by me' is the correct passive agent.

× Everyone having their own choice.

✓ Everyone has their own choice.

'Everyone' is singular and requires a singular verb 'has'. 'Having' is a present participle and incorrect here; the correct verb form is 'has'.

× Anne Some people go to the market and they buy their necessary things because in the market everything our display on the tables we can say.

✓ And some people go to the market and buy their necessary things because in the market everything is displayed on the tables, we can say.

The sentence has several structural issues: 'Anne' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'And'. 'Our display' should be 'is displayed'. The sentence is run-on and needs proper punctuation and conjunctions.

× So I think so that's why they can make their list someone having sharp Embry to buy this and this so this by.

✓ So I think that's why they don't make their list; some have a sharp memory to buy this and that directly.

The original sentence is unclear and contains pronoun misuse and nonsensical phrases like 'sharp Embry'. Corrected to convey intended meaning with proper pronouns and vocabulary.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because sometimes we felt paper we lost that paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because sometimes if we have paper, we lose that paper.

'Make list on my phone' needs an article 'a list'. 'Felt paper' is incorrect; likely intended 'have paper'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× If we kept that list in our phone, it would save an we can go to the shop and take that necessary things instant.

✓ If we keep that list on our phone, it will be saved and we can go to the shop and take those necessary things instantly.

The sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect articles and adverbs. 'Kept' should be 'keep' for present conditional. 'Save an' is incorrect; 'be saved' is correct passive form. 'That necessary things' should be 'those necessary things'. 'Instant' should be 'instantly' as an adverb.

× I would say to all the people that they should make their list in the phone setting on the page.

✓ I would say to all people that they should make their list on the phone using a note-taking app.

'In the phone setting on the page' is unclear and incorrect. Corrected to a clearer expression. Also, 'to all the people' can be simplified to 'to all people'.