List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding unnecessary fillers like 'uh' and correcting sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the list helps you.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list on the notepad app on my phone. This helps me remember the important items I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything while shopping.

Sugestão: Improve clarity by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain clearly how the list helps you manage your study schedule and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my studies. It helps me organise which subject to study each day, so I don't forget my tasks. This method has greatly improved my time management and focus.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to present your ideas logically and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Exemplo: I believe some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks without writing them down. Therefore, they find lists unnecessary.

Sugestão: Work on sentence fluency and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more precise about the advantages of using a phone for lists.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone's notepad app because it is convenient to carry and less likely to be lost compared to paper notes, which can easily get damaged or misplaced.

× I make a list when I'm going to for a shop.

✓ I make a list when I'm going shopping.

The phrase 'going to for a shop' is incorrect. The correct form is 'going shopping' where 'shopping' is the gerund form used after 'going'. This follows the rule of using verb + -ing form after 'go' to indicate an activity.

× And so with that I remember the things what I came to buy.

✓ And so with that I remember the things that I came to buy.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used here. The correct relative pronoun to refer to 'things' is 'that'. Using 'that' properly connects the clause to the noun it describes.

× Yes, I make list for my book.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my book.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Omitting the article leads to ungrammatical sentence structure.

× When I make the list I remember that today is the day of doing this subject or tomorrow is the day of doing another subject.

✓ When I make the list I remember that today is the day for doing this subject or tomorrow is the day for doing another subject.

The phrase 'day of doing' is awkward. The correct preposition is 'for' followed by the gerund form 'doing' to indicate purpose or scheduled activity.

× It helped me a lot in my studies and it also helped me to remind the. Remind me in the process of.

✓ It helped me a lot in my studies and it also helped me to remind myself in the process.

The phrase 'helped me to remind the' is incomplete and incorrect. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is needed after 'remind' to indicate that the subject is reminding themselves.

× I think I think some people are not absent minded.

✓ I think some people are not absent-minded.

The adjective 'absent-minded' should be hyphenated when used before a noun or as a predicate adjective. Also, the repetition of 'I think' is unnecessary and should be avoided for clarity.

× They recognize everything in their mind.

✓ They recognize everything in their minds.

The phrase 'in their mind' is incorrect because 'they' is plural and should be matched with the plural noun 'minds'.

× So that this is the why.

✓ So that is why.

The phrase 'So that this is the why' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'So that is why' to indicate a reason or explanation.

× Other people don't make the list because they remember everything what they are going to do tomorrow or today or yesterday.

✓ Other people don't make the list because they remember everything that they are going to do tomorrow, today, or yesterday.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used; 'that' is the correct relative pronoun to refer to 'everything'. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list of time references.

× I prefer to make list on my.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my...

The noun 'list' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'a' before it. The sentence is incomplete but the correction applies to the phrase given.

× I prefer to make list on my. Or notepad in my mobile phone because it is very.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my notepad in my mobile phone because it is very...

The preposition 'on' is correct here, but the sentence is fragmented. The article 'a' is needed before 'list'. The sentence should be completed for clarity.

× Easiest way of. Carrying the list with yourself.

✓ The easiest way to carry the list with you.

The phrase 'easiest way of carrying' is awkward; the correct expression is 'the easiest way to carry'. Also, 'with yourself' is incorrect; 'with you' is appropriate.

× The paper note will lasst sometimes, but the list on my phone cannot be lossed.

✓ The paper note will last sometimes, but the list on my phone cannot be lost.

The verbs 'lasst' and 'lossed' are misspelled. The correct past tense of 'last' is 'last' (used here in future tense 'will last'), and the past participle of 'lose' is 'lost'. Also, 'sometimes' is awkward here; 'sometimes' usually refers to frequency, better to say 'may get lost' or 'can be lost'.