List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct grammar. For example, say "I am a very organized person, so I usually make a list when I shop." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I am a very organized person, so I usually make a list when I go shopping. This helps me remember all the items I need to buy. Without a list, I often forget important things. Therefore, I plan ahead and write down everything before I go.

Sugestão: Focus on clear and correct sentence formation. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' properly. For example, say "I make lists for my work, but sometimes they don't work because I plan too many tasks in one day."

Exemplo: I make lists for everything, including my work. However, sometimes the lists don't work because I try to do too many things in one day. As a result, I forget some tasks. I think I should plan more realistically.

Sugestão: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. For example, say "Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to go with the flow."

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to go with the flow. However, I believe making a list helps to prioritize tasks and manage time smoothly. So, making lists can be very useful.

Sugestão: Use clearer sentences and correct vocabulary. For example, say "I prefer making lists on paper because I tend to add too many things on my phone and lose focus." Also, explain your reason logically with linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because when I use my phone, I tend to add too many things and lose focus. On paper, I write carefully and prioritize what I need. This helps me manage my time and money better.

× Is I am very planned parcel so I usually make at least when I shop.

✓ I am a very planned person, so I usually make a list when I shop.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'Is I am' is incorrect; it should be 'I am'. 'planned parcel' is a wrong phrase; it should be 'planned person'. 'make at least' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'make a list'. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.

× Otherwise I tend to forget the shopping list or of the things I want to buy.

✓ Otherwise, I tend to forget the shopping list or the things I want to buy.

The phrase 'or of the things' is incorrect because 'of' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'or the things'. Also, a comma after 'Otherwise' improves clarity.

× So I plan ahead of time and make a list about the thing I want to show generally.

✓ So I plan ahead of time and make a list of the things I want to shop for generally.

The phrase 'make a list about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things'. 'show' is a typo and should be 'shop'. The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and word forms.

× Actually I'm a very organized person, I make list for everything including my work.

✓ Actually, I'm a very organized person; I make lists for everything including my work.

'make list' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is needed here. Also, a semicolon or period is better than a comma to separate independent clauses.

× But sometimes it doesn't work because I want too much thing in a day and I tend to forget all the thing that I need to do.

✓ But sometimes it doesn't work because I want too many things in a day and I tend to forget all the things that I need to do.

'too much thing' is incorrect; 'thing' is countable, so 'too many things' is correct. Similarly, 'all the thing' should be 'all the things'.

× So I it doesn't work user usually he, but I think it I should.

✓ So it doesn't usually work, but I think I should try harder.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'user usually he' and 'it I should'. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× I think some person on to go with the flow that's why they don't want to make a list,

✓ I think some people like to go with the flow; that's why they don't want to make a list,

'some person on to go' is incorrect. It should be 'some people like to go'. Also, 'person' should be plural 'people' to match 'some'. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and verb forms.

× but I think 1 should make a list to prioritize your things an while smoothly.

✓ but I think one should make a list to prioritize your things and work smoothly.

'1' should be spelled out as 'one' in formal writing. 'an while' is incorrect; it should be 'and work'. The corrected sentence uses proper quantifiers and conjunctions.

× So oh, but if they don't want to make at least I think it's because they are because they.

✓ So, if they don't want to make a list, I think it's because of their personality.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. The corrected sentence completes the thought clearly and grammatically.

× I prefer taking least on a paper because in my phone I intend to include so many things that I don't under my or are you don't want to prioritize.

✓ I prefer taking lists on paper because on my phone I tend to include so many things that I don't understand or don't want to prioritize.

'taking least on a paper' should be 'taking lists on paper'. 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'intend' should be 'tend'. 'under my or are you' is unclear and corrected to 'understand or don't'. The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and word forms.

× So in paper when I write things, I carefully right the least I want to buy so it's manage that time and money that I own 2 SPT correct?

✓ So on paper, when I write things, I carefully write the list I want to buy so I can manage my time and money correctly.

'in paper' should be 'on paper'. 'right the least' should be 'write the list'. 'it's manage that time and money that I own 2 SPT correct?' is unclear and corrected to 'so I can manage my time and money correctly.' The corrected sentence uses proper prepositions and word forms.