List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时语句不够连贯，有语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意句子结构，避免断句不完整，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: When I was a child, my family usually made shopping lists. However, nowadays, with the convenience of online shopping, we simply select items on our phones, which is quick and requires no prior preparation.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: It depends. As a student, I don't always make lists during the semester because I can remember my classes and homework. However, during final weeks, I find it necessary to write lists to stay organized.

Sugestão: 回答内容有些混乱，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议简化内容，清楚说明观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because, according to the MBTI test, perceiving types prefer to be spontaneous and relaxed without strict plans. They may also be more creative compared to judging types who like to organize everything.

Sugestão: 回答中有拼写错误和语法问题，表达不够自然。建议注意拼写，使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better. In contrast, if I write lists on my phone, I tend to forget them quickly.

× But now with the convenience of Internet shopping, we just pick the items from our cell phones, so it's quite. Quick and we don't need to do preparation before shopping.

✓ But now with the convenience of Internet shopping, we just pick the items from our cell phones, so it's quite quick and we don't need to do preparation before shopping.

句子中“so it's quite. Quick”中间不应有句号，导致句子结构不完整，应改为“so it's quite quick”。

× I am on currently a student right now and. In the semester I do not always make a list because I have class you attend an I have work to do, homework to write in everything.

✓ I am currently a student right now and in the semester I do not always make a list because I have classes to attend and I have work to do, homework to write, and everything.

句子中“and. In the semester”断句错误，且“class you attend an”表达不完整，应调整为连贯的句子。

× Have you heard of the MBTI test They. Put people in your two-part, perceiving part and judging part.

✓ Have you heard of the MBTI test? They put people into two parts: perceiving part and judging part.

句子中“MBTI test They.”断句错误，应分为两个句子，并且“in your two-part”应为“into two parts”。

× For the perceiving person, they may find it's more relaxed, relaxed to two things without plans.

✓ For the perceiving person, they may find it's more relaxed to do things without plans.

“relaxed to two things”中“to two things”用法错误，应改为“to do things”。

× And these people may be more creative so they're not like judging me.

✓ And these people may be more creative so they're not like judging people.

“judging me”用词不当，应为泛指“judging people”。

× I prefer to make lace on paper.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper.

“make lace”拼写错误，应为“make lists”。

× I found is crazy that when I write down something I remember it a very efficient way while if I write it down on phone.

✓ I find it crazy that when I write down something I remember it in a very efficient way, while if I write it down on my phone,

句子结构不完整，“I found is crazy”应为“I find it crazy”，并且缺少介词“in a very efficient way”。

× I forget it very soon.

✓ I forget it very soon.

此句无语法错误，符合语境。