List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and clearer. Use present simple tense for habitual actions and avoid redundancy. Also, try to keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy. Moreover, it saves time and prevents me from forgetting important items.

Sugestão: Try to use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to explain your points. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my duties. As a result, I can manage my busy schedule effectively and avoid forgetting tasks.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas clearly using proper sentence structure and linking words. Explain your opinion with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Some people do not like making lists because they have a strong memory and can remember things easily. Therefore, they feel that making a list is unnecessary for them.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Use present simple tense and complete your thoughts. Explain your preference clearly with reasons and linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better. Also, it feels more personal and I can easily see the list without using my phone.

× Yes I was make a list when I will go for a shop for shopping because it was help me to buy a things and it is also helping me when I was go.

✓ Yes, I made a list when I went shopping because it helped me to buy things and it also helped me when I went.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was make' instead of the past tense 'made' and mixes future tense 'will go' with past tense context. The verbs should be in the past tense to match the time frame of the action. Also, 'a things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and does not need 'a'. Use 'made' for past action and 'went' for past movement.

× Yes I was make a list when I will go for a shop for shopping because it was help me to buy a things and it is also helping me when I was go.

✓ Yes, I made a list when I went shopping because it helped me to buy things and it also helped me when I went.

The phrase 'a things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. The correct form is simply 'things' without 'a'.

× I am going for shower to maintain what can I when what is am buying.

✓ I go shopping to remember what I am buying.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect tense and structure. 'I am going for shower' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'I go shopping'. The phrase 'to maintain what can I when what is am buying' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses present tense to express habitual action and clarity.

× Yes. Of course I was making a list when I was go for her work and it is also worked becauses where it it was helping me to maintain am my duties.

✓ Yes, of course I made a list when I went to her work and it also worked because it was helping me to maintain my duties.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was making' and 'was go' instead of past tense 'made' and 'went'. Also, 'becauses where it it' is incorrect and should be 'because it'. The verb tenses should be consistent in past tense to describe past actions.

× Yes. Of course I was making a list when I was go for her work and it is also worked becauses where it it was helping me to maintain am my duties.

✓ Yes, of course I made a list when I went to work and it also worked because it was helping me to maintain my duties.

The phrase 'for her work' is incorrect; it should be 'to work' unless referring to a specific person. Also, 'am my duties' is incorrect; it should be 'my duties'. Pronouns and possessives must be used correctly to convey meaning.

× It is also help me in my busy schedule. I was not forgot anything.

✓ It also helped me in my busy schedule. I did not forget anything.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is help' with past context. It should be 'helped' to match past tense. Also, 'was not forgot' is incorrect; the correct negative past tense is 'did not forget'.

× Because every person has. Every situation and state of mind, some peoples things, her state of mind are strong.

✓ Because every person has different situations and states of mind; some people's things and their state of mind are strong.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people' or possessive 'people's'. Also, 'every person has' is incomplete and needs clarification. The sentence needs proper plural forms and possessive pronouns.

× Because every person has. Every situation and state of mind, some peoples things, her state of mind are strong.

✓ Because every person has different situations and states of mind; some people's things and their state of mind are strong.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used when referring to 'some peoples things'; it should be 'their' to agree with plural possessive 'people's'.

× Because every person has. Every situation and state of mind, some peoples things, her state of mind are strong.

✓ Because every person has different situations and states of mind; some people's things and their state of mind are strong.

The phrase 'some peoples things' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'some people's things' to indicate possession. Also, 'every person has' is incomplete and needs quantifiers to specify what is had.

× They can not forget anything. That's the reason they should not make a list.

✓ They cannot forget anything. That's the reason they do not need to make a list.

The phrase 'should not make a list' implies obligation, but context suggests they do not need to. Also, 'can not' is better written as 'cannot'. The pronoun usage is correct but the modal verb usage needs adjustment.

× I am preferred to make a list on a paper becauses the most important reason is that when I was right something then it work because when I was written it, it also record on my mind when the.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because the most important reason is that when I write something, it works because when I write it, it also records in my mind.

The phrase 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable and does not need an article here. Also, 'was right' and 'was written' are incorrect past tense forms; 'write' and 'write' in present tense are appropriate for habitual action. 'Record on my mind' should be 'records in my mind'.

× I am preferred to make a list on a paper becauses the most important reason is that when I was right something then it work because when I was written it, it also record on my mind when the.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because the most important reason is that when I write something, it works because when I write it, it also records in my mind.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I am preferred' which is passive and incorrect; it should be 'I prefer' in present tense to express preference. Also, 'was right' and 'was written' are incorrect past tense forms; present tense 'write' is appropriate here.