List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and how it helps you.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget what I need to buy. Therefore, having a list helps me remember everything and shop more efficiently.

Sugestão: Try to use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to explain your points. Also, be specific about how the list helps you at work.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me keep track of my tasks. This way, I can complete my work on time and prepare for upcoming assignments.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct answer with reasons. Avoid unnecessary pauses and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some people do not like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to work spontaneously. Additionally, they might feel that lists restrict their flexibility.

Sugestão: Try to express your preference clearly and explain your reasons in a logical way. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because when I use my phone, it can be distracting. Also, having a paper list is easier to access while working.

× my brain is very weak and I does not remember what's a purchase for a swap and I.

✓ my brain is very weak and I do not remember what's a purchase for a swap and I.

The verb 'does' is incorrectly used with the pronoun 'I'. The correct auxiliary verb for 'I' in the present tense is 'do'. So, 'I does not remember' should be 'I do not remember'.

× And whenever make it a make a list is very easy purple.

✓ And whenever I make a list, it is very easy to remember.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It lacks a subject and proper verb form. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'I' and clarifies the meaning by stating that making a list makes remembering easier.

× Yes, of course I make a list for a work.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list for work.

The article 'a' before 'work' is unnecessary because 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context. The correct phrase is 'make a list for work'.

× Yes they working because they list is remember how to work in time to time and also prepare for the your next work because the list is remember what do you work in this time.

✓ Yes, they work because their list helps them remember how to work from time to time and also prepare for their next work because the list helps them remember what work they have to do at this time.

The verb 'working' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. Also, 'they list' should be 'their list' to show possession. The sentence structure is corrected to use proper verb forms and possessive pronouns.

× the other people does not make a list 'cause.

✓ the other people do not make a list because.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' instead of 'does'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in this context.

× They don't work in a time.

✓ They don't work on time.

The correct preposition to indicate punctuality is 'on' as in 'on time', not 'in a time'.

× I always prefer to make a list on our paper be 'cause you make a list on your phone.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on paper because you make a list on your phone.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrectly used; it should be 'paper' without a possessive pronoun. Also, 'be 'cause' is informal and should be 'because'.

× Your phone in your hand and. The list. Is other side and you use the phone in a work time and I prefer to make a list in a paper.

✓ Your phone is in your hand, and the list is on the other side. You use the phone during work time, so I prefer to make a list on paper.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connectors. The correction adds necessary verbs, conjunctions, and prepositions to make the sentence coherent and grammatically correct.