List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ hoặc câu không hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important. For instance, I usually write down all the groceries I need so I can shop efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: As a student with a busy schedule, I find making lists very helpful. It helps me save time and energy by organizing my tasks efficiently. For example, I usually plan my weekly schedule in advance, which allows me to study more effectively and avoid last-minute stress.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng thì và cấu trúc câu đúng, đồng thời sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it. When they try for the first time, they may find it difficult and confusing. Sometimes, they make mistakes and have to correct them, which can be frustrating.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because apps like Google Calendar are very convenient and easy to use. For example, if I make a mistake, I can easily edit or delete items without wasting paper. Also, having my list on my phone means I can check it anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, of course less time anything before going to somewhere is IK specially useful.

✓ Yes, of course, making a list before going somewhere is especially useful.

The original sentence has unclear structure and word order, making it difficult to understand. The correction clarifies the meaning by properly ordering the words and using the correct phrase 'making a list before going somewhere'.

× For example, when before I go into the grocery stores are usually lays down many necessary things that I need to buy so that I can.

✓ For example, before I go to the grocery store, I usually write down many necessary things that I need to buy so that I can save time and energy.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words, making it incomplete and confusing. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clear and grammatically correct form.

× You know, energy saving and prevent me from from.

✓ You know, it saves energy and prevents me from forgetting items.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the sentence with proper subject and verb agreement and clarifies the meaning.

× It helped me saving both time and energy by organizing my tasks efficiently.

✓ It helped me save both time and energy by organizing my tasks efficiently.

After the verb 'helped', the base form of the verb 'save' should be used instead of the gerund 'saving'.

× I usually plan make weekly schedule in advance so that I can study more effectively and avoid last minute stress.

✓ I usually plan and make a weekly schedule in advance so that I can study more effectively and avoid last-minute stress.

The original sentence is missing conjunction 'and' and the article 'a' before 'weekly schedule'. Also, 'last minute' should be hyphenated as 'last-minute' when used as an adjective.

× When they tried to make a list for the first time, I often find it difficult and confusing or over.

✓ When they try to make a list for the first time, they often find it difficult and confusing or overwhelming.

The original sentence incorrectly switches pronouns from 'they' to 'I' and uses 'or over' which is unclear. The correction maintains consistent pronouns and replaces 'or over' with 'or overwhelming' for clarity.

× Sometimes they make a mistake an have to correct down.

✓ Sometimes they make mistakes and have to correct them.

The original sentence has a typo 'an' instead of 'and' and incorrect phrase 'correct down'. The correction fixes these errors and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× We can be frustrating.

✓ It can be frustrating.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'We' as the subject. The corrected sentence uses 'It' to refer to the situation, which is appropriate.

× Personally I prefer making lists on my phone because apps like Google Calendar or very convenient and easy to use.

✓ Personally, I prefer making lists on my phone because apps like Google Calendar are very convenient and easy to use.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'Google Calendar' and lacks a comma after 'Personally'. The correction adds these for grammatical correctness.

× Also I having my list on my phone minutes again I says at anytime and anywhere.

✓ Also, having my list on my phone means I can access it anytime and anywhere.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words like 'minutes again I says'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the grammar.