List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons why you make a list when shopping.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it keeps me within my budget and prevents impulse buying, which can be costly.

Sugestão: Your response is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Be specific about how making a list helps you manage your work.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because my schedule is usually hectic. By organizing my tasks and assigning time slots, the list helps me manage my time effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it overwhelming and boring. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory rather than written plans.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier to carry and update anywhere. Furthermore, digital lists can send reminders, which paper lists cannot.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go for shopping as it helped me to remind remember everything.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping as it helps me to remember everything.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'helped' with present tense context. Also, 'remind remember' is redundant; 'remember' alone is correct. The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'.

× Which is important and it.

✓ This is important.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a clear subject and verb. It should be a complete sentence to convey the idea clearly.

× Use me to be in my budget and the stalks me called Impulse Band.

✓ It helps me stay within my budget, and the app I use is called Impulse Band.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and lacks clarity. 'Use me' is incorrect; 'It helps me' is correct. 'Stalks me' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; 'app' fits the context better.

× And use a talking that which gives me a track of my shopping list.

✓ I also use a talking app that helps me keep track of my shopping list.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and articles. 'Use a talking that which' is incorrect; it should specify 'a talking app that' for clarity and correctness.

× Are usually terrible, very hectic schedule, so to make me organize and.

✓ I usually have a very hectic schedule, so I make lists to help me stay organized.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. It needs to be restructured to form a complete and clear sentence.

× Do a sign my work according to my time.

✓ I assign my work according to my time.

'Do a sign' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'assign'. Also, the sentence needs a subject 'I' for clarity.

× I do make a list of my work and it certainly helped me a lot and managing my time.

✓ I do make a list of my work, and it certainly helps me a lot in managing my time.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do make' with past tense 'helped'. Since the action is habitual, present tense 'helps' is appropriate. Also, 'and managing' should be 'in managing' for correct grammar.

× Some people find it a daunting task and it makes them aboard and so I think that this is only reason which could be there for their don't making both list.

✓ Some people find it a daunting task and it makes them bored, so I think that this is the only reason why they don't make lists.

The original sentence misuses 'aboard' instead of 'bored', and has incorrect pronouns and structure. 'Their don't making both list' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't make lists'.

× Not making the list on cell phone is much more convenient than a paper, as it is very easier and convenient to carry anywhere you want.

✓ Making the list on a cell phone is much more convenient than on paper, as it is easier and more convenient to carry anywhere you want.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Not making' instead of 'Making', and misuses articles 'a paper' instead of 'on paper'. Also, 'very easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone suffices.