List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki penggunaan kata yang salah seperti 'lease' menjadi 'list' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari kesalahan tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, when the store is crowded, I can easily forget things, so having a list keeps me organized and saves time.

Sugestão: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan tata bahasa yang benar. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan jelaskan manfaat membuat daftar pekerjaan dengan lebih spesifik.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list in my notebook every day. Whenever I complete a task, I mark it off, which helps me stay organized and productive.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan susunan kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan dengan lebih logis dan spesifik.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time to plan everything in advance. They might prefer to be spontaneous rather than spending time organizing their day.

Sugestão: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Jelaskan alasan preferensi dengan kalimat yang terstruktur dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk koherensi.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because it's satisfying to physically mark off each completed task. Also, if I use my phone, I might lose the list if the phone runs out of battery.

× Without a lease, I might forget important items, specially when the store is crowded.

✓ Without a list, I might forget important items, especially when the store is crowded.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' to convey the intended meaning.

× Without a lease, I might forget important items, specially when the store is crowded.

✓ Without a list, I might forget important items, especially when the store is crowded.

The adverb 'specially' is incorrect in this context; 'especially' is the correct adverb to emphasize the condition.

× Whenever I think of something I want to purchase, I add it to my list to stay, organize and save time.

✓ Whenever I think of something I want to purchase, I add it to my list to stay organized and save time.

The phrase 'stay, organize' is incorrect; it should be 'stay organized' to use the correct adjective form after 'stay'.

× Is something like To Do List in my notebook and every time I have done it I. Make a mark in is after point.

✓ It is something like a To-Do List in my notebook, and every time I have done a task, I make a mark after the point.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect word order and punctuation. Adding 'It is' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× It's very help.

✓ It's very helpful.

The adjective 'help' is incorrect here; the correct adjective form is 'helpful' to describe something that provides assistance.

× I think it's because some people thinking make.

✓ I think it's because some people think making lists is...

The verb 'thinking' is incorrectly used; the base form 'think' should be used here. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.

× 1st is very wasting time because you have to think about whatever you want to do every day.

✓ First, it is very time-wasting because you have to think about whatever you want to do every day.

The phrase '1st is very wasting time' is incorrect; 'time-wasting' is the correct adjective form, and 'First' should be used as a transition word.

× Maybe some people don't want to spend that time to thinking.

✓ Maybe some people don't want to spend that time thinking.

The phrase 'to thinking' is incorrect; after 'spend time', the gerund form 'thinking' should be used without 'to'.

× I prefer to make less on paper because it's very satisfying when I mark it off every point I turn.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because it's very satisfying when I mark off every point I turn.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'lists' to refer to multiple items.

× I prefer to make less on paper because it's very satisfying when I mark it off every point I turn.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because it's very satisfying when I mark off every point I complete.

The phrase 'every point I turn' is unclear; 'every point I complete' is more appropriate to express finishing tasks.

× if I do it in my phone when my phone is that I don't have any list anymore.

✓ If I do it on my phone and my phone is off, then I don't have any list anymore.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding conjunctions and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.