List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and detailed. Try to avoid repeating words like 'I' and 'because' too closely. Also, add a linking phrase to make your answer flow better.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list as I tend to forget items once I enter the supermarket. This helps me stay organised and ensures I don't miss anything important.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly. Explain why making lists at work is effective for you with more detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work tasks because it helps me stay focused. Moreover, I feel a sense of achievement whenever I complete each item on the list, which motivates me to keep going.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and precise. Avoid repeating words like 'some' and try to expand your explanation with linking words.

Exemplo: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find the process boring and time-consuming. Additionally, they might prefer to rely on memory or spontaneous decisions instead.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and some grammatical errors. Try to speak more confidently and organise your ideas clearly with linking words.

Exemplo: It depends, but nowadays I prefer making lists on my smartphone because I always have it with me. This makes it easier to access my lists compared to paper, which can easily get lost.

× Yes, I make it a rule to do so because. I think I can feel. I can feel the sense of achievement once I fulfill each item.

✓ Yes, I make it a rule to do so because I think I can feel the sense of achievement once I fulfill each item.

The original sentence contains incomplete sentences and unnecessary full stops, which disrupt the sentence flow and clarity. Combining the fragments into one coherent sentence improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× I think one of the reasons is that making a list itself is boring and it takes some some time to complete it.

✓ I think one of the reasons is that making a list itself is boring and it takes some time to complete it.

The phrase 'some some time' contains a repeated quantifier 'some'. Removing the duplicate 'some' corrects the redundancy and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Uh, it depends. I these days I make some lists on smartphone because wherever I go I am with the phone and it's I think easier to access instead of paper because if you have paper you will probably lose it.

✓ Uh, it depends. These days, I make some lists on my smartphone because wherever I go, I have my phone with me and I think it's easier to access than paper because if you have paper, you will probably lose it.

The original sentence has misplaced words and missing possessive pronouns, causing confusion. Correcting word order, adding 'my' before 'smartphone', and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.