List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid sentence fragments and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me find the items easily and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugestão: Your answer needs better structure and grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas. Also, correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'Oh'.

Exemplo: I don't usually make lists for household chores; however, when I study for college, I definitely prefer to make a list because it keeps me organized and helps me stay focused.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid fillers like 'Uh' and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'as'. Make sure sentences are complete and coherent.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious and boring, and it also makes them feel more responsible for their work, which they may want to avoid.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by combining sentences for better flow and using linking words like 'although' or 'but'. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases and be more concise.

Exemplo: Although I sometimes make a list on paper if it's handy, I usually prefer to use my phone because it is very convenient and always available.

× Helps me finding those things easily and it's really convenient method for me to remember these things.

✓ It helps me find those things easily and it's a really convenient method for me to remember these things.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses incorrect verb forms. 'Helps me finding' should be 'It helps me find' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, 'it's really convenient method' needs an article 'a' before 'really convenient method'. The corrected sentence has proper subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.

× Oh I definitely prefer to make a list because it keeps me organized and stay focused.

✓ Oh, I definitely prefer to make a list because it keeps me organized and helps me stay focused.

The original sentence has a missing comma after 'Oh' and lacks parallel structure. 'Keeps me organized and stay focused' mixes verb forms; both verbs should be parallel. Adding 'helps me' before 'stay focused' corrects this and maintains parallelism.

× In my opinion. Uh, the answer to the question why don't some people like making lists would be they find this work very tedious or boring and also it leads to. Be more responsible towards their work, which they don't really want.

✓ In my opinion, the answer to the question 'Why don't some people like making lists?' is that they find this work very tedious or boring, and also it leads to being more responsible towards their work, which they don't really want.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect sentence structure. 'In my opinion.' is a fragment and should be connected with the following sentence. 'Leads to. Be more responsible' is incorrect; it should be 'leads to being more responsible'. Also, the question should be in quotes and the sentence restructured for clarity.