List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and lacks fluency. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it makes things easier for me.'

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Sugestão: Your answer is fragmented and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words. For example, 'Yes, I make a list when I have work to do because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting tasks. As a result, I feel less stressed.'

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list when I have work to do because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything. Consequently, I feel less stressed and more productive.

Sugestão: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Use clearer vocabulary and structure. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they prefer to do tasks spontaneously without planning.'

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time to prepare them, and they prefer to complete their tasks spontaneously without planning.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but has minor grammatical errors. Use linking words to improve coherence. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper, and it saves time.'

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper, and it saves me time.

× Yes, I usually list of things when I do go shopping because it find me easy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of things when I go shopping because it makes it easy for me.

The original sentence misses the verb 'make' before 'a list' and incorrectly uses 'find' instead of 'makes it easy'. The verb 'make' should be used with 'a list', and 'makes it easy' correctly expresses the idea. Also, 'do go' is unnecessary; simple present 'go' suffices.

× Yes, I'll make a list when I. I have to do my work becaused it make me organize an I do not forget anything and if it makes me feel. Less stressful.

✓ Yes, I'll make a list when I have to do my work because it helps me stay organized and I do not forget anything, and it makes me feel less stressed.

The sentence has incomplete and incorrect parts. 'becaused' should be 'because', 'make' should be 'helps' to agree with the subject, 'organize' should be 'stay organized', and 'if it makes me feel less stressful' should be 'it makes me feel less stressed'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and needs to be combined properly.

× Some people don't prefer making list becauses it consumes chime.

✓ Some people don't prefer making lists because it consumes time.

The word 'chime' is incorrect; it should be 'time'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' to be plural and correct. 'Because' is misspelled as 'becauses'.

× Some people don't prefer making list becauses it consumes chime.

✓ Some people don't prefer making lists because it consumes time.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of general preference. Also, 'because' is misspelled and 'chime' should be 'time'.

× And they feel like doing it whenever they have to do their task or whatever the work they need to do.

✓ They feel like doing it whenever they have to do their tasks or whatever work they need to do.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'whenever they have to do their tasks'. Also, 'the work' should be 'work' without 'the' for general meaning.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on a paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression without an article.

× Also it writing on paper consumes my time.

✓ Also, writing on paper consumes my time.

The phrase 'it writing' is incorrect; it should be just 'writing' as the subject of the sentence. A comma after 'Also' improves clarity.