List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваш ответ немного неестественный и содержит грамматические ошибки, а также избыточность. Следует избегать повторений и использовать более связные предложения.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me buy only the necessary items and avoid unnecessary purchases.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и понятные предложения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a weekly work plan where I list all my tasks, and I follow it closely. This helps me stay organized and be more productive.

Sugestão: Ответ фрагментирован и содержит паузы, что снижает естественность речи. Следует строить более плавные и связные предложения.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and they prefer to spend their time on other activities.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Рекомендуется использовать более точные формулировки и связные предложения.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can easily check and update my plans, which makes me more flexible.

× I think it's a good opportunity to buy only necessary products and items and. Avoid the purchase of unnecessary products.

✓ I think it's a good opportunity to buy only necessary products and items and avoid purchasing unnecessary products.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly split into two parts. The conjunction 'and' should connect the two ideas in one sentence. Also, 'Avoid the purchase' is better expressed as 'avoid purchasing' for smoother flow.

× Yes, I usually make a plan out for my working week where I described from all all events on my plans and I follow it.

✓ Yes, I usually make a plan for my working week where I describe all the events in my plans and I follow it.

The verb 'described' is incorrectly used in past tense; it should be present tense 'describe' to match the habitual action. Also, 'make a plan out' is awkward; 'make a plan' is sufficient. The phrase 'from all all events on my plans' is unclear and corrected to 'all the events in my plans'.

× There are a lot of reasons, but some domain of them is that it is time consuming.

✓ There are a lot of reasons, but some of them are that it is time-consuming.

The phrase 'some domain of them' is incorrect; it should be 'some of them'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'some of them'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× And not every. Person want to. Ah, spend time on it.

✓ Not every person wants to spend time on it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary pauses. 'Person' should be singular with 'wants' to agree in subject-verb agreement. The sentence is better as a single, clear statement.

× As for me, I prefer make at least on my phone because it's more convenient for me.

✓ As for me, I prefer to make my list at least on my phone because it's more convenient for me.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'prefer to make'. The phrase 'make at least on my phone' is unclear; adding 'my list' clarifies the meaning.

× I always can check my plan and. Maybe change something I can regulate it?

✓ I can always check my plan and maybe change something; I can adjust it.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. 'I always can' is better as 'I can always'. The question mark is inappropriate here. 'Regulate it' is better replaced with 'adjust it' for natural expression.