List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and combining sentences smoothly. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I usually shop with my parents, and they often make a list. However, when I shop alone, I always make a list to help me organize what I need to buy.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words to make it more coherent. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my ideas and complete tasks more efficiently. For example, when I have a list, I can prioritize my work and avoid forgetting important details.

Sugestão: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary words and focus on the main reason.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes more time than doing the actual task. Therefore, they prefer to start working immediately without planning.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting minor errors and making the sentence flow better. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's more convenient and practical than using paper, which can be easily lost or damaged.

× I often shop with my mother or my father so they regularly make the make a list, but however I more often try to depend on myself and go by myself.

✓ I often shop with my mother or my father, so they regularly make a list, but I more often try to depend on myself and go by myself.

The phrase 'make the make a list' contains a redundant use of the definite article 'the' and repetition of 'make'. Removing 'the make' corrects the sentence. Also, 'but however' is redundant; 'but' alone suffices. The sentence is corrected by removing the extra article and repetition, and simplifying the conjunction.

× So when I go by myself. I make a list so can I so that I can organize my ideas.

✓ So when I go by myself, I make a list so that I can organize my ideas.

The original sentence has a period splitting the sentence incorrectly and an extra 'so' before 'that'. Correcting punctuation and removing the extra 'so' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Of course I make a list for my work because I need to have my ideas organized and it make me finish things faster than usual and I think that everyone should try this method.

✓ Of course I make a list for my work because I need to have my ideas organized and it makes me finish things faster than usual, and I think that everyone should try this method.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'. It should be 'makes' to match the third person singular subject. Also, adding a comma before 'and' improves readability.

× They will improve their skill faster.

✓ They will improve their skills faster.

The noun 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to correctly refer to multiple abilities that can be improved. This is a singular/plural issue.

× I believe that some people don't like making lists because I'm making lists takes more time than that at the task itself, the actual task.

✓ I believe that some people don't like making lists because making lists takes more time than the task itself, the actual task.

The phrase 'I'm making lists takes' is incorrect; 'I'm' (I am) is unnecessary and causes confusion. Removing 'I'm' corrects the pronoun misuse and clarifies the sentence.

× So they just ignore the this step and go along with doing the tasks.

✓ So they just ignore this step and go along with doing the tasks.

The phrase 'the this step' incorrectly uses two determiners together. Removing 'the' corrects the article usage.

× On some bill.

✓ On some bill.

This fragment 'On some bill.' is incomplete and unclear. However, since it is unclear what was intended, no correction is provided here.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and it's small and practical to use more often than holding holding a paper and going around with it.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and it's small and practical to use more often than holding a paper and going around with it.

The word 'holding' is repeated twice. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.