List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as 'sharp short memory' which is unclear. Also, keep answers concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I have a poor memory, and it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and stay on topic. Avoid confusing statements like making a list when going for a walk instead of for work. Use correct verb forms and linking words to clarify your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work, but sometimes I don't follow them strictly, which affects my productivity.

Sugestão: Focus on answering why some people dislike making lists rather than why they make them. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory instead.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and avoid confusing or irrelevant details. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and organize your answer logically with linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to update whenever I need to.

× Definitely I make list whenever I shop it 'cause I have I have really sharp short memory, so in order to get everything.

✓ Definitely I make a list whenever I shop because I have a really short memory, so in order to get everything.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'sharp short memory' is incorrect; 'really short memory' is more natural. The phrase 'it 'cause' is informal and should be 'because' for clarity.

× Definitely I make list whenever I shop it 'cause I have I have really sharp short memory, so in order to get everything.

✓ Definitely I make a list whenever I shop because I have a really short memory, so in order to get everything.

The conjunction 'it 'cause' is informal and incorrect; it should be replaced with 'because' to properly connect the clauses.

× To be honest, I make a list whenever I go for a walk. Sometimes it work or sometimes it not work because I still remember that last week I make a plan.

✓ To be honest, I make a list whenever I go for a walk. Sometimes it works or sometimes it does not work because I still remember that last week I made a plan.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'list' or 'plan' and requires third person singular verb forms 'works' and 'does not work'. Also, 'make a plan' in past context should be 'made a plan' (past tense).

× To be honest, I make a list whenever I go for a walk. Sometimes it work or sometimes it not work because I still remember that last week I make a plan.

✓ To be honest, I make a list whenever I go for a walk. Sometimes it works or sometimes it does not work because I still remember that last week I made a plan.

The action 'make a plan' happened in the past, so the verb should be in past tense 'made'. Also, 'work' should be 'works' or 'does not work' for subject-verb agreement.

× And that according to that I will do my work but I was not able to follow it.

✓ And according to that, I will do my work but I was not able to follow it.

The phrase 'And that according to that' is incorrect. It should be 'And according to that' to properly use the preposition 'according to'.

× Aspar my perception, some people have short memory so they make list that they do not forget anything to buy in the shopping time also and sometimes people also make list for the special occasions.

✓ As per my perception, some people have short memories so they make lists so that they do not forget anything to buy during shopping time, and sometimes people also make lists for special occasions.

'Memory' should be plural 'memories' to match 'some people'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'Aspar' is a typo for 'As per'.

× Aspar my perception, some people have short memory so they make list that they do not forget anything to buy in the shopping time also and sometimes people also make list for the special occasions.

✓ As per my perception, some people have short memories so they make lists so that they do not forget anything to buy during shopping time, and sometimes people also make lists for special occasions.

The phrase 'in the shopping time' is incorrect; 'during shopping time' or 'when shopping' is more appropriate.

× For example, for wedding, birthday parties and so on.

✓ For example, for weddings, birthday parties and so on.

'Wedding' should be plural 'weddings' to match the plural 'birthday parties' and to indicate general occasions.

× Two, to be honest, I make a list on my phone in the notes.

✓ To be honest, I make a list on my phone in the notes.

The word 'Two' is incorrect here; it seems to be a mishearing or typo and should be removed.

× So whenever I go for a shopping at that time also I make a list of the of the things.

✓ So whenever I go shopping, at that time also I make a list of the things.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'of the of the things' is redundant and should be 'of the things'.

× Apart from this, I still remember that last year in my brothers mad on my brother's marriage, I mickle list on my phone as well.

✓ Apart from this, I still remember that last year, on my brother's marriage, I made a list on my phone as well.

'Brothers mad' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'brother's marriage'. 'Mickle list' is incorrect; should be 'made a list'. The sentence needs rephrasing for clarity.