List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. For example, when I buy clothes or groceries, having a list helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it saves time and prevents unnecessary purchases.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Begin with a clear statement about making lists for work, then explain how it helps you, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating the same points and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, I list tasks related to grocery shopping and my studies. This method ensures I complete all my duties efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address why some people dislike making lists. Try to clearly state reasons why some people avoid lists, and support your points with examples or explanations using linking words.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility when shopping or working.

Sugestão: Your answer is too short and does not address the question. Always provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question, followed by reasons or examples to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime. Also, using apps helps me set reminders for important tasks.

× That's definitely because I'm a person who forgot the things easily so I always prefer to make a list when I going to outside for buying cloth as well as another shop things.

✓ That's definitely because I'm a person who forgets things easily, so I always prefer to make a list when I go outside to buy clothes as well as other shopping items.

The error is in the use of plural and singular forms. 'forgot' should be 'forgets' to match the present tense and third person singular subject 'I am a person who'. 'the things' should be 'things' without 'the' for generalization. 'going to outside' is incorrect; it should be 'go outside'. 'cloth' should be plural 'clothes' when referring to garments. 'another shop things' is incorrect; it should be 'other shopping items'. Suggestions: Use correct singular/plural forms and proper verb forms to match the subject and tense.

× Yes, many times when I'm in my work I always make a list. Like when I going to outside for grocery shopping, grocery work as well as my studies I always prefer to make a list.

✓ Yes, many times when I'm at work, I always make a list. Like when I go outside for grocery shopping, grocery work, as well as my studies, I always prefer to make a list.

The error is in verb tense and preposition use. 'when I'm in my work' should be 'when I'm at work' as 'at work' is the correct phrase. 'when I going to outside' is incorrect; it should be 'when I go outside'. The verb 'go' must be in present tense to match the context. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions and present tense verbs for habitual actions.

× I think a lot of reason the people has maker list first and foremost is I think they have forgot the thing easily as well as I think making list is a better way to knowing about the product when we have boy anything.

✓ I think a lot of reasons people have made lists. First and foremost, I think they forget things easily. Also, I think making a list is a better way to know about the products when we buy anything.

Multiple errors here: 'a lot of reason' should be 'a lot of reasons' (plural). 'the people has maker list' is incorrect; it should be 'people have made lists' (subject-verb agreement and past participle). 'have forgot' should be 'forget' for present tense habitual action. 'making list' should be 'making a list' (article usage). 'to knowing' should be 'to know' (infinitive form). 'boy anything' is a typo for 'buy anything'. Suggestions: Use correct plural forms, subject-verb agreement, verb forms, articles, and correct spelling.