List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "It's really helps me to not for get a things" and "it avoids me of buying unnecessary items." To improve, focus on correct verb forms and prepositions, and try to make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the things I need and saves time. Also, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items that I don't usually eat.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and grammatical mistakes, such as "make your list" instead of "make a list," and "an saves me time." Try to avoid repeating the same idea and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like "especially" and "therefore" to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when I have many tasks. It helps me focus and manage my time efficiently, so I can complete everything on schedule.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "a tedious and time consuming" and "confident on their mind to not forgive." To improve, use correct articles and expressions, and clarify your ideas. Also, use linking words like "because" and "also" to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it tedious and time-consuming. Also, others are confident they can remember their tasks without writing them down.

Sugestão: Your answer has some awkward phrasing and grammatical errors, such as "make your list on a paper" and "it's not very dangerous." Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect your reasons clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on paper because using a phone in public can be risky, and I might lose it. Writing it down helps me remember better, and a paper list is easy to carry around.

× It's really helps me to not for get a things that I want to buy and also it saves my time.

✓ It really helps me not to forget the things that I want to buy and also saves me time.

The auxiliary 'does' is missing for the third person singular 'it' in 'It's really helps'. Also, 'for get' should be 'forget' as one word. 'A things' is incorrect; 'the things' is appropriate here. The phrase 'it saves my time' should be 'saves me time' for natural expression.

× Additionally it avoids me of buying unnecessary items that I don't eat.

✓ Additionally, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items that I don't eat.

The verb 'avoid' is incorrectly used with 'me of'; the correct preposition is 'from' and the verb should be 'prevents' or 'stops' to fit the meaning. 'Avoids me of buying' is ungrammatical.

× Yes, I make your list for my work, especially when I have a lot of things to do.

✓ Yes, I make my list for my work, especially when I have a lot of things to do.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrectly used instead of 'my' to refer to the speaker's own list.

× So it helps me to focus on my tasks an saves me time and after that it's really efficient for me to save me time.

✓ So it helps me to focus on my tasks and saves me time, and after that it's really efficient for me to save time.

The verb 'saves' requires the conjunction 'and' (not 'an'). Also, 'save me time' is redundant; 'save time' is more natural. The sentence is long and could be clearer with commas.

× Some people don't like making list because they think it's really a tedious and time consuming, so they prefer a spend their time on completing tasks.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it's really tedious and time-consuming, so they prefer to spend their time completing tasks.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'. 'A tedious' is incorrect; 'tedious' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Prefer a spend' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to spend'.

× Additionally, the others are very confident on their mind to not forgive.

✓ Additionally, others are very confident in their minds not to forget.

'The others' is unnecessary; 'others' suffices. 'Confident on their mind' should be 'confident in their minds'. 'To not forgive' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'not to forget'.

× I prefer to make your list on a paper because I think it is really dangerous to use a phone in a public and also it is risky to lose it.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because I think it is really dangerous to use a phone in public and also it is risky to lose it.

'Your list' should be 'my list' as the speaker refers to their own list. 'On a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. 'In a public' should be 'in public' without 'a'.

× So I prefer to write it down to remember it better and it's very comfortable to carry it, so it's not very dangerous.

✓ So I prefer to write it down to remember it better, and it's very comfortable to carry, so it's not very dangerous.

The pronoun 'it' after 'carry' is unnecessary and awkward; 'carry' is transitive but here the object is implied. Removing 'it' improves clarity.