List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "I do make a list whenever I go shopping," say "I always make a shopping list." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as "however" to contrast your intention and action. Finally, watch verb tense consistency and plural forms, e.g., "things that I need" instead of "needed."

Exemplo: I always make a shopping list to ensure I only buy the things I need. However, when I get to the store, I sometimes end up buying extra items that aren't on my list.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question well, but it can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences more concise. For example, say "I always make a daily task list to avoid missing anything and to prioritize important tasks. This helps me manage my time efficiently." Also, use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect reasons clearly.

Exemplo: I always make a daily task list because it helps me avoid missing anything and prioritize important tasks. This way, I can manage my time efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use a clear topic sentence, then support it with reasons using linking words like "because" and "if." For example, "Some people don't make lists because they haven't learned how to organize their day. If they are taught the benefits, they might start making lists." Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they haven't learned how to organize their day effectively. If they are taught the benefits and methods, they might start using lists to improve their productivity.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural expressions and clearer linking. For example, say "I used to write my lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. Also, I can set alarms to remind me of priorities, which makes it easier." Avoid filler phrases like "what do you call this."

Exemplo: I used to write my lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. Also, I can set alarms to remind me of important tasks, which makes managing my day easier.

× This is so I will only buy the things that I needed, but unfortunately when I get to the store I still tend to buy other stuff that I don't need.

✓ This is so I will only buy the things that I need, but unfortunately when I get to the store I still tend to buy other stuff that I don't need.

The verb 'needed' is incorrectly used in the past tense here. Since the sentence talks about a general habit or future intention, the present tense 'need' is appropriate. Using 'needed' implies a past action, which does not fit the context.

× Yes, I always make a list in my daily task.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my daily tasks.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'daily task'. The correct preposition is 'for' when referring to making a list related to tasks. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the general meaning.

× I do this so that I won't be able to miss something and also to prioritize what is important and so that I would be able to manage my time efficiently.

✓ I do this so that I won't miss something and also to prioritize what is important and so that I will be able to manage my time efficiently.

The phrase 'won't be able to miss' is incorrect because 'miss' here means 'fail to remember or do something', so 'won't miss' is correct. Also, 'would be able to' should be 'will be able to' to express future ability related to the present intention.

× I don't think people doesn't have list because they don't want to.

✓ I don't think people don't have a list because they don't want to.

The verb 'doesn't' does not agree with the plural subject 'people'. The correct form is 'don't'. Also, 'list' should have an article 'a' before it.

× Most probably they don't have one because they haven't been introduced to this kind of organizing your day.

✓ Most probably, they don't have one because they haven't been introduced to this kind of day organizing.

The phrase 'this kind of organizing your day' is awkward and ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'this kind of day organizing' to be grammatically correct and clearer.

× I believe with these people are taught and how they have to do it, I believe.

✓ I believe if these people are taught how they have to do it, they will benefit.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks proper conjunctions and structure. Adding 'if' and completing the thought makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× I used to put my list in the paper, but now that I have a mobile phone, I I prefer to use my mobile because it's very convenient and accessible.

✓ I used to put my list on paper, but now that I have a mobile phone, I prefer to use my mobile because it's very convenient and accessible.

The phrase 'in the paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× And aside from that, I can also put a what do you call this a an alarm and to prioritize and it's easier.

✓ And aside from that, I can also set an alarm to prioritize, and it's easier.

The phrase 'put a what do you call this a an alarm' is incorrect and awkward. The correct verb is 'set' an alarm. Also, 'and to prioritize' should be rephrased to 'to prioritize' as an infinitive phrase explaining the purpose.