Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答喜不喜欢，再解释原因。注意避免重复或错误表达：“I prefer to say listening to”应改为“I prefer listening to”，“good better technique”应改为“better technique”。“most of them are not good at singing”略显生硬，可以换成更委婉、自然的说法。

Exemplo: I don’t usually enjoy listening to my classmates sing, as some of them are still developing their skills. I prefer listening to professional singers because they have better technique, and I can learn from the way they control their voices.

Sugestão: 回答直接，背景和学习方式也比较具体。建议在“professional classes”前补充更准确的“singing”，并在“so”前加逗号。结尾是陈述句，不需要问号；“learned it”也可以明确说成“learned to sing”。

Exemplo: No, I haven’t taken any formal singing classes. I grew up in a small town where there weren’t many opportunities to study singing, so I mostly learned by singing with friends and watching online videos.

Sugestão: 回答覆盖了喜好、原因和练习方式，内容较充分。注意“express myself and the emotions”表达不自然，可说“express my emotions”；“it also can help me”改为“it can also help me”。“Especially some upbeat pop”是残句，建议并入前一句，并将“foreign artists”换成更自然的“international artists”。

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax. I often sing upbeat pop songs by international artists. I practise along with the recordings, which also helps me improve my pronunciation.

Sugestão: 你清楚说明了自己没有上过正式课程，并补充了模仿录音的学习方法。注意“formal singer classes”应改为“formal singing classes”，“recordings created by singers”可简化为“recordings by singers”。避免连续重复“imitating”，并将“And this...”与前一句连接。

Exemplo: No, I haven’t taken any formal singing classes. I’ve mainly learned by copying recordings by singers I like. This helps me practise their pronunciation and style, as well as improve my pitch and timing.

Sugestão: 这一题有明显的语音转写或用词问题：“seem for”应为“sing for”，“re unwind”应为“unwind”。回答没有清楚回应想为谁唱；可以说明自己通常不特意为某个人唱，而是独处或与朋友一起唱。最后一句未完成，而且“nervous about my housework”与语境不太自然，建议删去或换成具体、相关的情境。

Exemplo: I don’t have a particular person in mind. I usually sing for myself when I want to unwind, especially after a stressful day. Sometimes I also sing with friends because it makes us feel more relaxed.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也给出了聚会的例子，但有几处词语错误：“a sing”应为“singing”，“cheerful meal”可能想表达“cheerful melody”，“lift the moods”应为“lift people’s moods”。避免重复“everyone”，并在“For example”后加逗号。

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because cheerful melodies can lift their mood. For example, when friends sing together at a party, they often feel more relaxed and connected.

× I prefer to say listening to professional singers since they have good better technique and I can learn from them.

✓ I prefer listening to professional singers since they have better technique and I can learn from them.

“Prefer”后面可以接动名词（prefer doing）或不定式（prefer to do），但不能说“prefer to say listening”。这里应改为“prefer listening”。

× I prefer to say listening to professional singers since they have good better technique and I can learn from them.

✓ I prefer listening to professional singers since they have better technique and I can learn from them.

“good better”把原级“good”和比较级“better”重复叠加了。此处表达“技巧更好”，使用比较级“better”即可。

× Yes, I really enjoy singing because it's a great way to express myself and the emotions and it also can help me to relax.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it's a great way to express myself and my emotions, and it can also help me relax.

这里说的是自己的情绪，应使用物主限定词“my”，而不是定冠词“the”。“my emotions”也使“express myself”和“express my emotions”结构更清楚。

× I often sing songs by foreign artists. Especially some upbeat pop.

✓ I often sing songs by foreign artists, especially some upbeat pop songs.

“Especially some upbeat pop.”没有谓语动词，不能独立构成完整句子。可以把它接在前一句后面，并补上“songs”使表达完整。

× No, I haven't had formal singer classes.

✓ No, I haven't had formal singing classes.

这里需要用“singing”修饰“classes”，表示“歌唱课程”。“singer”指歌手，不能在这里表达课程内容。

× For example, when I feel sad or quite nervous about my housework, I will say

✓ For example, when I feel sad or quite nervous about my housework, I will sing to relax.

句子以“I will say”结束，意思没有表达完整；“say”通常需要接说出的内容。结合上下文谈论唱歌，可补全为“I will sing to relax”。

× Yes, I believe a sing can bring happiness to people because the rhythm and the cheerful meal can lift the moods.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because rhythm and a cheerful melody can lift people's moods.

“sing”是动词，不能直接放在冠词“a”后充当这里的名词主语。用动名词“singing”可以表示“唱歌”这一活动。