Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting reasons with specific details. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds (umm, uh).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a stressful day. For example, when I sing my favourite pop songs for 15–20 minutes, I immediately feel calmer and can forget about my problems.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct tense. Provide a brief explanation with a specific detail about why you haven't learned or what you did instead. Keep it to two or three sentences max.

Exemplo: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. Singing is just a hobby for me, so I practice by watching online videos and singing along to recordings instead of taking classes.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific example of when you sing for them to make the answer more vivid. Reduce fillers and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I usually sing for my friends and parents because they are very supportive. For instance, I often perform a few songs at family gatherings, which makes me feel relaxed and confident.

Sugestão: State your opinion clearly and support it with a reason and a short example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to improve coherence and specificity.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because it reduces stress. For example, after a long week, my friends and I sing together and everyone seems more cheerful and relaxed.

Sugestão: Be concise and choose precise vocabulary (artists, performance, style). Give a brief reason why you like listening and perhaps name a genre or artist for specificity.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to different singers because each artist has a unique style. For example, I like listening to Adele for her emotional voice and Coldplay for their melodies.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and concise structure: a direct answer followed by a reason. Replace fillers with clear phrases and give a specific alternative activity that you do instead of classes.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken singing lessons because I see singing as a way to relax rather than a career. Instead, I practice by singing along to recordings and watching online tutorials.

× I like saying umm, because I think it's just one of the methods for me to relieve out my stress and when I was singing, I, I can forgot, uh, all the worries, uh, I have.

✓ I like singing, because I think it's one of the ways for me to relieve my stress, and when I sing I can forget all the worries I have.

Errors: 'saying umm' should be 'singing' (correct verb form and word choice). 'One of the methods for me to relieve out my stress' uses incorrect preposition and phrasing: use 'one of the ways to relieve my stress'. 'When I was singing' should be simple present 'when I sing' to match the habitual meaning. 'I can forgot' uses wrong verb form — use base form 'forget' after modal-like 'can'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms, remove unnecessary filler words, use 'ways' or 'methods' with 'to' and 'relieve my stress'.

× No, I, I don't learn how to sing uh, before, umm, for me, I think uh, seeing is just uh, my interest. Umm, I'm not professional.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing before. For me, singing is just my hobby. I'm not a professional.

Errors: 'don't learn ... before' mixes present simple with 'before'—use present perfect 'haven't learned' for life experience. 'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. 'Just my interest' is unnatural; 'hobby' or 'interest' as noun fits. 'I'm not professional' needs article: 'a professional'. Suggestions: use present perfect for past experiences without specific time, correct typos, include articles where required.

× Umm, I would like to sing for my friends, my parents, umm, because they support me a lot and I, I feel umm, comfortable, uh, when I stay with them.

✓ I would like to sing for my friends and my parents because they support me a lot, and I feel comfortable when I'm with them.

Errors: 'when I stay with them' is awkward; use 'when I'm with them'. Keep tense consistent: 'I would like' is fine for preference. Remove redundant commas and fillers. Suggestions: use natural collocations like 'with them' and contract 'I am' to 'I'm' in speech but keep full form in writing.

× Yeah, I've been seeing can bring happiness for people because they can relieve their stress and forget all the worries and they just enjoyed uh for us, uh, for singing.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it can relieve stress and help them forget their worries, and people enjoy singing.

Errors: 'I've been seeing' is incorrect and should be 'I think singing' or 'singing'. 'Bring happiness for people' should be 'bring happiness to people'. 'They can relieve their stress'—use 'it' or 'singing' as the subject. 'They just enjoyed uh for us' is ungrammatical; use 'people enjoy singing'. Suggestions: use correct subject for verbs, correct prepositions ('to' not 'for'), and keep verb tenses consistent (present simple for general truths).

× Umm, yeah, I like to listening to artists saying, umm, no matter is umm, a good song or a bad song, uh, they have their own, uh, characteristic and it's good to listening.

✓ Yes, I like listening to artists sing; whether a song is good or bad, they have their own characteristics, and it's good to listen.

Errors: 'like to listening' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'like listening' or 'like to listen'. 'Saying' should be 'sing' here. 'No matter is a good song or a bad song' needs 'whether a song is good or bad'. 'Characteristic' should be plural 'characteristics'. 'It's good to listening' should be 'it's good to listen' or 'it's good listening'. Suggestions: choose correct verb forms (infinitive vs gerund), use 'whether' for alternatives, and match singular/plural nouns.

× No, I, uh, didn't, uh, taking a singing class, umm, because I think, uh, singing, uh, it's just a method to, uh, relieve the stress. Umm, and I'm not going to be a professional singer so that I'm not going to learning.

✓ No, I haven't taken a singing class because I think singing is just a way to relieve stress. I am not going to be a professional singer, so I'm not going to learn.

Errors: 'didn't taking' mixes past auxiliary with -ing; use 'haven't taken' or 'didn't take'. Use present perfect for life experience. 'Just a method to relieve the stress' — use 'a way to relieve stress' and drop 'the'. 'I'm not going to learning' should be 'I'm not going to learn' or 'I will not learn'. Suggestions: use correct past participle after auxiliaries, use 'way' instead of 'method' for natural phrasing, and use infinitive after 'going to'.