Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “by to sing” or “singing different emotions expresses.”

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express emotions I find hard to put into words. For example, when I feel happy or sad, singing a song lets me release those feelings and feel calmer.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then add one clear detail about how you learned informally. Use correct verb forms and reduce hesitation. Replace vague phrases like “where I learned that how to sing” with a clear clause.

Exemplo: No, I have never had formal singing lessons. However, I have learned some techniques by watching concerts and singer documentaries, which taught me about tone and breathing.

Sugestão: Answer directly and confidently. State who you would sing for and give a specific reason or example. Avoid filler words and repetitions like “the, the” and incorrect tense forms.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my family because they are very important to me. For example, I would perform a simple song at a family gathering to show my appreciation.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion and support it with a specific reason. Use linking words like “however” or “for example” to structure your reply. Avoid vague hedging like “maybe or maybe not.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because music often uplifts people’s mood. However, if someone is unwell or dislikes a particular style, singing might not cheer them up.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and give a specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct comparative forms (e.g., “better”) and clearer vocabulary like “vocals” or “technique.”

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to other singers, especially those with strong vocals and good technique. For instance, I like to listen to artists who can control their voice and convey emotion.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and one succinct reason. Avoid awkward phrasing like “no sing” and excessive filler. Use natural expressions such as “I have never taken a singing class” and explain briefly why not.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken a singing class because I do not plan to pursue singing professionally. Instead, I enjoy singing casually at home or with friends.

× The reason is that singing by to sing a song you can express the feelings that you always wanted to say.

✓ The reason is that by singing a song you can express the feelings you have always wanted to say.

Incorrect word order and use of 'to sing' after 'by'. After 'by' we use the -ing form (gerund) to show method (by singing). Also 'always wanted to say' should be 'have always wanted to say' for present perfect to show a continuing desire.

× So by singing different emotions expresses.

✓ So singing can express different emotions.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subject-verb agreement. The gerund 'singing' should act as the subject and take a verb ('can express') followed by the object 'different emotions'.

× Not at all, but by attending a concerts or seeing the singer documentaries, Artist documentaries.

✓ Not at all, but by attending concerts or watching singer documentaries I learned a little.

After 'by' use the -ing form 'attending' and the noun should be plural 'concerts' (quantifier agreement). Use 'watching' rather than 'seeing' for documentaries. Also the original had fragmented structure; a complete clause clarifies meaning.

× So where I learned that how to sing a song with the specific, uh, tone.

✓ That is where I learned how to sing a song with a specific tone.

'Where' placement and 'that how' is incorrect. Use 'learned how to' without 'that'. 'A specific tone' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× Uh, it's a difficult question, but I would say I'm going to sing for my family because it's the, the family is precious for me and always precious, uh, to me.

✓ Uh, it's a difficult question, but I would say I'm going to sing for my family because family is precious to me and always has been.

Redundant articles 'the family' are unnecessary when speaking generally; use 'family' or 'my family'. Also use present perfect 'has been' to indicate a continuous state. 'Precious to me' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× So I will, uh, be sing a song to, for my family in a better way.

✓ So I will sing a song for my family in a better way.

Incorrect auxiliary construction 'be sing' — use 'will sing' for future. Also 'to, for' is redundant; use 'for'.

× Maybe or maybe not, but singing because everyone has a different genre I would say.

✓ Maybe yes, maybe no, but it depends on the genre, because everyone likes different kinds of music, I would say.

Sentence fragments and missing connector. Use 'depends on' to express conditional idea and add 'kinds of' or 'genres' for clarity. Modal expression 'would say' is acceptable at end.

× So sometime it going to be very pleasant for someone, but sometime it's difficult because because of illness or something else.

✓ So sometimes it can be very pleasant for someone, but sometimes it can be difficult because of illness or other reasons.

Use 'sometimes' (plural) not 'sometime', add modal 'can' for possibility, remove duplicate 'because', and 'other reasons' is clearer than 'something else'.

× Yeah, I, yes, I like very much other singer artist or as someone who's singing, uh, betterly.

✓ Yes, I really like other singers or artists, or someone who sings well.

Use plural 'singers' and 'artists' when speaking generally. 'Very much' typically follows the verb ('I like that very much') but 'I really like' is more natural. 'Betterly' is not a word; use 'well'.

× Because if, if, if, if the voice of someone has the better vocals, then you can be very, uh, good and very be, uh, pleasant.

✓ Because if someone has good vocal ability, their singing can be very pleasing.

Remove stuttering and incorrect phrases. Use 'someone has good vocal ability' or 'strong vocals' and 'pleasing' instead of awkward 'very be pleasant'.

× No sing, but uh, uh, not at all.

✓ No, I haven't sung in a class, not at all.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'haven't sung' or 'have never taken singing lessons' to match the question about experience.

× Taking singing class is going to be very professional.

✓ Taking singing classes is very professional.

Use plural 'classes' generally, and do not need future 'is going to be'; simple present 'is' states a general truth.

× So I'm not big. I'm not, I, I have no any, uh, niche to become a singer.

✓ So I'm not ambitious; I have no intention of becoming a singer.

'No any' is incorrect — use 'no' or 'not any' but better to use 'no intention' or 'no desire'. 'I'm not big' is unclear; 'not ambitious' or 'not interested' conveys meaning.

× So there is no any room to for me that I'm going to learn singing from the class.

✓ So there is no opportunity for me to learn singing from a class.

Use 'no opportunity' rather than 'no any room', and correct preposition 'for me to learn'. Remove extra 'to' and reorder to form a natural infinitive phrase.