Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce repetition and correct grammar; give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (however, because, for example). Correct vocabulary (e.g., "choir" or "karaoke" instead of "curriculum") and articles (a drink → drinks).

Exemplo: Honestly, I don't really like singing because I have no sense of rhythm, so I rarely sing in front of others. However, I sometimes go to karaoke with friends after drinks, and I enjoy belting out songs in a relaxed setting.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid colloquialisms like "wanna" in formal test; fix repetition and tense. Start with a clear direct answer, then give a reason or a specific goal and how you would train. Use linking words such as "but" or "so".

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but if I had the opportunity I would train my voice to improve pitch control and learn how to sing high notes clearly, for example by practicing scales with a vocal coach.

Sugestão: Remove filler words like "Hmm" and be more precise. Provide one clear topic sentence and one specific example of a situation. Fix grammar ("along with the gift" → "along with a gift").

Exemplo: I don't like singing in public, but I would be happy to sing for close friends or family. For example, I might perform a short song at a family member's birthday party while presenting a gift.

Sugestão: Answer directly, avoid hesitation and correct grammar and word choice ("courses" → "chores"). Use a linking phrase to give an example and be specific about effects (mood, energy, stress relief).

Exemplo: Yes, definitely; singing boosts my energy and lifts my mood. For example, when I'm doing household chores like cooking or cleaning, I often hum or sing, which makes the tasks feel quicker and more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Fix repetition and grammar ("is good at is good at"). Use correct vocabulary ("karaoke" not "Cara karaoke") and simplify. Give a reason why you enjoy listening and a specific example.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing because it can be inspiring and entertaining. For example, one of my friends is a great singer, so I often go to karaoke with her to listen and support her performances.

Sugestão: This answer contains many errors and unclear phrases ("train my boys", "wanna how to pay"). Keep it simple: direct negative, then a clear conditional wish and specific goal. Avoid slang and correct grammar.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but if I had the opportunity I would take lessons to develop my vocal technique and learn how to sing high notes with better control.

× To be honest, no. I I have no sense of rhythm so I rarely sing in front of people. However, I sometimes go to a curriculum to belt out some songs with my friends after having a drinks.

✓ To be honest, no. I have no sense of rhythm, so I rarely sing in front of people. However, I sometimes go to a karaoke venue to belt out some songs with my friends after having a drink.

Errors: duplicated word 'I I' and run-on sentence missing comma before 'so' (Sentence structure errors). 'curriculum' is incorrect word choice — likely meant 'karaoke' or 'venue' (vocabulary, treated as sentence structure here). 'a drinks' is incorrect article/number agreement; use 'a drink' or 'drinks'. Suggestion: remove duplicate word, add comma to separate clauses, use the correct noun 'karaoke venue' or 'karaoke place', and match article and noun number ('a drink' or 'drinks' without 'a').

× No, I've never taken any lessons before, but if I had the the opportunity to learn I would love to train my voice and I wanna learn how to hit high pitched tones properly.

✓ No, I've never taken any lessons before, but if I had the opportunity to learn, I would love to train my voice and I want to learn how to hit high-pitched tones properly.

Errors: duplicate word 'the the' (article error), informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' (register), and 'high pitched' should be hyphenated as 'high-pitched' when used as a compound adjective. Also missing comma before conditional result clause. Suggestion: remove duplicate article, replace informal contraction with standard form, hyphenate compound adjective, and add comma for clarity.

× Hmm I don't like singing in public but if I had to I would sing for my friends or family. It would be amazing performing it at a birthday party with along with the gift.

✓ Hmm, I don't like singing in public, but if I had to, I would sing for my friends or family. It would be amazing to perform it at a birthday party along with the gift.

Errors: missing commas for clause separation (tense context is fine). 'performing it' should be infinitive 'to perform it' to match modal 'would'. 'with along with the gift' contains redundant prepositions and wrong order; use 'along with the gift'. Suggestion: add commas, use 'to perform', and remove redundant preposition.

× Yes, without a doubt, it makes me feel much more energetic. For example, I when I doing household courses such as cooking or cleaning, I often hum or sing to myself.

✓ Yes, without a doubt, it makes me feel much more energetic. For example, when I am doing household chores such as cooking or cleaning, I often hum or sing to myself.

Errors: 'I when I doing' is missing auxiliary verb and misplaced words; need 'when I am doing' (verb + -ing requires auxiliary). 'courses' is wrong word choice; should be 'chores'. Suggestion: include auxiliary 'am' before present participle and use correct noun 'chores'.

× Yes, I like to listening to others singing. One of my friends is good at is good at singing so I like to go to a Cara karaoke room with her.

✓ Yes, I like listening to others singing. One of my friends is good at singing, so I like to go to a karaoke room with her.

Errors: 'like to listening' mixes infinitive and -ing form; use either 'like to listen' or 'like listening' (present participle form error). Duplicate phrase 'is good at is good at' and 'Cara karaoke' seems redundant or brand confusion; keep 'karaoke room'. Suggestion: choose correct verb form, remove duplicated words, and simplify nouns.

× No, I have never taken any lessons before, but if I had the had the opportunity to learn I would love to train my boys and I wanna how to pay how to hit high pitched tones properly.

✓ No, I have never taken any lessons before, but if I had the opportunity to learn, I would love to train my voice and I want to learn how to hit high-pitched tones properly.

Errors: duplicate 'the had the' (article/error and extra word), 'train my boys and I' is incorrect and unclear — likely meant 'train my voice' (pronoun/phrase error), 'wanna how to pay how to hit' is ungrammatical and contains extra words. Also 'high pitched' needs hyphen. Suggestion: remove duplicates, use correct object 'my voice', replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to', remove extraneous words 'how to pay', and hyphenate 'high-pitched'.