Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify your main idea with one clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use specific reasons with correct grammar. Keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Use linking words like because and also to connect points.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and reduce stress. Also, singing is a fun way to learn performance skills and enjoy music with others.

Sugestão: Correct factual vocabulary errors and present a clear direct answer. Say whether you had formal lessons, then add one brief specific detail about school experience. Use linking words like but or however if needed.

Exemplo: Not really, I haven't had formal singing lessons. However, I learned some basic vocal techniques during school music classes where we practiced breathing and simple songs.

Sugestão: Answer directly and keep details specific and natural. Reduce awkward phrasing (e.g., 'sustain our favorite songs') and use linking words like so or because to explain why. Two to three concise sentences are enough.

Exemplo: I mainly like to sing for my friends because we often go to karaoke after class or during summer holidays. Singing together is a fun way for us to relax and share our favourite songs.

Sugestão: Make one clear reason and give a concise example. Avoid long, repetitive phrases and fix grammar (word order, articles). Use a linking phrase like for example to introduce a situation.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can make people happy because it lifts the mood and relieves stress. For example, many people sing in the car or shower to feel more cheerful.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., tense, word order). Use linking words such as especially or because to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing, especially my friends. Their voices often sound warm and emotional, so I can really get into the music.

Sugestão: Be direct about whether you took formal singing classes. Use simple clear sentences to explain school lessons vs professional lessons and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'primary school music class' not 'scene class').

Exemplo: I haven't had professional singing lessons. I only attended a basic music class at primary school where every student learned simple vocal exercises and songs.

× Yes, I like singing because I sing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it lets me sing.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkward: 'I like singing because I sing' repeats the same idea without giving a clear reason. Rewriting to 'because it lets me sing' or 'because I enjoy singing' makes the sentence natural and explains the reason. Use a phrase that provides a reason rather than repeating the noun and verb.

× The actor singing can express myself more frequently, and I think it's also a flexible way for me to relieve my pressure and learn another kinds of entertainment and skills.

✓ Singing allows me to express myself more easily, and I think it's also a flexible way for me to relieve stress and learn other kinds of entertainment and skills.

The original has several pronoun and word-choice errors: 'The actor singing' is incorrect and likely intended to be 'singing' as a general activity. 'Express myself' should not be used with 'The actor', and 'relieve my pressure' is incorrect collocation — use 'relieve stress'. 'Another kinds' is wrong number and determiner; use 'other kinds'. The corrected sentence replaces the awkward subject with 'singing' and fixes pronouns and word forms.

× Not really, I haven't had pharmacy lessons.

✓ Not really, I haven't had any singing lessons.

The phrase 'pharmacy lessons' is likely a wrong word choice; 'singing lessons' fits the context. Also 'haven't had' is present perfect and fine, but it needs the correct noun and usually 'any' before countable plural 'singing lessons'.

× I did learn something basic during music classes at school through where we practice songs in the vocal exercise.

✓ I learned some basics during music classes at school, where we practiced songs and did vocal exercises.

The original sentence has awkward structure: 'through where' is ungrammatical and verb tenses are inconsistent. Use simple past 'learned' and restructure to 'where we practiced songs and did vocal exercises' for clarity and correct sequence of ideas.

× I want to sing for my friends.

✓ I want to sing for my friends.

Sentence is grammatically fine. No correction needed. It correctly uses the pronoun 'my' to indicate possession and fits the question context.

× We always go to the karaoke after class or in the summer vacations.

✓ We always go to karaoke after class or during the summer vacation.

Use 'go to karaoke' (no 'the' usually) and 'during' for periods like 'the summer vacation'. 'Vacations' plural is unnatural here; use 'vacation' or 'vacations' with a different structure. The corrected version uses appropriate prepositions and singular 'vacation'.

× We just go there to express ourselves and sustain our favorite songs together.

✓ We just go there to express ourselves and sing our favorite songs together.

'Sustain our favorite songs' is incorrect collocation and verb choice. The intended meaning is likely 'sing our favorite songs together'. Replace 'sustain' with 'sing' for correct verb usage.

× And I think that it is a very popular entertainment among young people.

✓ I think it is a very popular form of entertainment among young people.

Use 'a very popular form of entertainment' to sound natural. 'Very popular entertainment' is understandable but less idiomatic; adding 'form of' clarifies the noun and article usage.

× Yes, I think that singing can bring happiness to people because no matter within what kind of place such as in a car or in shower thing can it bring our happiness and it is kind of a form for us to to stay happiness and the release release our pressure.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it can make us happy anywhere, such as in a car or in the shower, and it helps us relieve stress.

The original is ungrammatical and very awkward: incorrect word order ('can it bring'), unnecessary repetition ('to to', 'release release'), and wrong collocations ('stay happiness', 'release our pressure'). The corrected sentence simplifies structure, fixes word order, removes repetitions, and uses natural collocations: 'make us happy', 'in the shower', and 'relieve stress'.

× Yes, I enjoy listening to other thing people think.

✓ Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing.

The original is confused: 'other thing people think' doesn't make sense. The intended meaning is 'other people singing'. Use 'other people' as the object and 'sing' as the verb (or 'listen to others sing'). This fixes pronoun and noun use.

× I especially like hearing my friends perform because their voices sounded warm and emotional and I can really get into the music.

✓ I especially like hearing my friends perform because their voices sound warm and emotional, and I can really get into the music.

Mixing past 'sounded' with present 'like' and 'can' is inconsistent. Use present tense 'sound' to match the habitual action 'I especially like'. This maintains tense consistency and clarity.

× Actually, people say that I happen to get in professional lessons about the scene, but I have a traditional scene class which we learned from the primary school.

✓ Actually, some people say I took professional lessons for singing, but I only had a standard music class that we learned in primary school.

The original uses awkward expressions: 'I happen to get in' is incorrect modal/verb construction for the intended meaning; 'about the scene' is unclear. Replace with 'took professional lessons for singing' or 'had professional lessons' and clarify 'a standard music class in primary school'. This fixes modal/verb usage and word choice.

× It is a music lesson that every students need to learn and at that time we always saw the sound and exercised.

✓ It was a music lesson that every student needed to take, and at that time we always practiced vocal exercises.

Subject-verb agreement: 'every students' should be 'every student' (singular). Tense consistency means past tense 'was' and 'needed' to match the past context. 'Saw the sound' is incorrect; replace with 'practiced vocal exercises' for correct verb choice and meaning.