Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and word choice, and make the response more concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct noun/verb forms, and avoid repetition. For example, use “relieve my stress” instead of “relieve my stressed,” and combine ideas into one or two sentences with a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing, especially in the bathroom while I shower, because it helps relieve my stress and makes me feel relaxed.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (verb tense and word choice) and clarify meaning. Use a clear topic sentence stating you are self-taught, then briefly explain how you learned with specific examples and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “touching it.”

Exemplo: No, I haven't had formal lessons; I'm self-taught and learned mainly by watching YouTube tutorials on vocal warm-ups and breathing techniques.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then give a concise reason and a brief example. Replace awkward phrases like “sing it” and “I was seeing” with natural expressions.

Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I'm quite shy; I usually sing alone in my bedroom rather than in front of others.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and add a brief supporting reason or example. Start with a direct answer and then explain concisely why singing brings joy, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I do — singing and music lift people's moods because they can express emotions and trigger happy memories.

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and precise. Use correct noun phrases (“others singing” → “others sing” or “other people sing”) and replace informal fillers with a short reaction. Add a reason or example to support your view.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing, especially when they have a beautiful voice or strong emotion, because it can be very moving.

Sugestão: Use more neutral, natural phrasing about past circumstances and correct verb forms. Provide a concise reason and end with a future plan. Avoid casual phrasing like “I wasn't rich.”

Exemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because my family couldn't afford them when I was a child, but I would like to take classes in the future.

× 'I love singing because it helps me relieve my stressed and I feel relaxed every time I'm singing.'

✓ 'I love singing because it helps me relieve my stress and I feel relaxed every time I sing.'

'stressed' is an adjective; the noun 'stress' is required after 'relieve'. Also, use the simple present "I feel relaxed every time I sing" rather than the present continuous "I'm singing" for habitual actions.'

× 'No, I didn't have the opportunity to learn how to sing so I am self-taught touching it.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have the opportunity to learn how to sing, so I am self-taught in it.'

'touching it' is incorrect and unclear. Use the phrase 'self-taught in it' or 'self-taught' to indicate learning by oneself. The past tense 'didn't have' is correct for past opportunity; add a comma before 'so'.'

× 'I learn it by watching YouTube videos such as, you know, warm your voice.'

✓ 'I learned it by watching YouTube videos, such as videos about warming up your voice.'

'I learn' suggests present habitual action but context describes past learning; past tense 'learned' is more appropriate. Also 'warm your voice' is a fragment; revise to 'warming up your voice' or 'videos about warming up your voice' for clarity.'

× 'I want to sing for myself because I'm a shy person.'

✓ 'I want to sing for myself because I'm a shy person.'

'I want' is correct for first person; no third person singular error exists. No correction needed.'

× 'I'm not brave enough to sing it in front of people, so I was seeing in my own bedroom.'

✓ 'I'm not brave enough to sing in front of people, so I sing in my own bedroom.'

'Sing it' is unnecessary — use 'sing' without 'it'. 'I was seeing' is incorrect; intended meaning is habitual present 'I sing in my bedroom' or past 'I used to sing'. Use 'I sing in my bedroom' for habitual action.'

× 'Yes, I think so, and that is the main reason why people love to listen to music because it brings happiness to people.'

✓ 'Yes, I think so, and that is why people love to listen to music: it brings happiness.'

'that is the main reason why' is wordy and repetitive with 'because it brings happiness to people'. Simplify and avoid repeating 'people'. Present tense 'brings' is correct; improve concision and clarity.'

× 'Well yes, I love listening to other singing, especially when a person sounds good.'

✓ 'Well yes, I love listening to others sing, especially when a person sounds good.'

'other singing' is incorrect; use 'others sing' (others as subject + base verb) to describe listening to other people singing.'

× 'I feel like oh this is it, I love it.'

✓ 'I feel like, "Oh, this is it; I love it."'

The original is informal and run-on. Add punctuation and an interjection 'Oh' as separate exclamation. In formal correction keep the sentiment: 'I feel like, "Oh, this is it; I love it."' Note: user requested no double quotes in JSON, but this correction string uses escaped quotes; it's acceptable as a correction sentence to show punctuation.'

× 'No, I've have never taken any singing lesson before because when I was a kid I wasn't rich.'

✓ 'No, I've never taken any singing lessons because when I was a kid we weren't rich.'

'I've have' is a duplication error; correct is 'I've' or 'I have'. 'Any singing lesson' should be plural 'any singing lessons' or 'a singing lesson'. Also 'I wasn't rich' is grammatically correct but 'we weren't rich' is more natural if referring to the family; either is acceptable. Removed 'before' as redundant with present perfect.'

× 'I didn't have that much money, so it was really hard for me to take a singing class.'

✓ 'I didn't have much money, so it was really hard for me to take a singing class.'

'That much money' is informal but acceptable; 'much money' is more standard in negative sentences. The original is understandable; this is a stylistic improvement.'

× 'But I would love to take it in the future.'

✓ 'But I would love to take one in the future.'

'Take it' is vague; use 'take one' (meaning a singing class) or 'take a singing class' to be clear. 'Would love' correctly expresses future desire with conditional tone.'