Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng ngôn ngữ lộn xộn, sai ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ: “absolutely yes”, “really hooked on”, “singing” nhiều lần). Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác, tránh từ thừa và cung cấp một hoặc hai ví dụ cụ thể. Chú ý sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc (e.g., because, so, for example) và sửa lỗi động từ/giới từ (use spend → spend time; help me release stress → helps me relieve stress).

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relieve stress and lift my mood. For example, I often sing popular songs I find on TikTok for about 20 minutes every day, which makes me feel more relaxed and happier.

Sugestão: Nội dung trả lời phù hợp nhưng thiếu chính xác và lẫn lộn từ vựng (e.g., “a little curiosity”, “Tiktok codes”). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, dùng thì đúng (have learnt → have learned/learnt; I learn → I learned or I learn from) và nêu cụ thể nguồn học. Tránh tiếng lắp và sửa cách diễn đạt để rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learned some singing techniques, but not from formal lessons. I learned from online tutorials on YouTube and TikTok, where vocal coaches share exercises for breathing and pitch control.

Sugestão: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng câu dài, không mạch lạc và ngữ pháp sai (I singing → I sing; emotion as throughout the story to the songs → the emotions of the song). Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cho ví dụ cụ thể về khán giả hoặc hoàn cảnh.

Exemplo: I would sing for anyone who enjoys my performance, but mainly I sing for myself. I enjoy conveying the emotions of a song to the audience — for example, when I perform a sad ballad, I try to express the story so listeners can feel the same emotions.

Sugestão: Thông điệp rõ nhưng ngôn ngữ không chính xác và có nhiều lỗi (that is like the best way → it can be a great way; they feel negatively → they feel low; I always singing → I always sing). Nên nêu một quan điểm ngắn, rồi dẫn chứng cụ thể (ví dụ tình huống), và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (cheer up, lift someone's spirits).

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can lift people's spirits. For instance, when a friend is feeling down, I often sing an upbeat song to cheer them up, and usually they say it makes them feel better.

Sugestão: Ý tốt nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt không tự nhiên (I just get out → I don't mind; I really precious with them → I really appreciate them). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, diễn đạt lý do ngắn gọn, dùng từ chính xác (appreciate, confident) và tránh lặp từ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về cảm xúc khi nghe người khác hát.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing because confidence matters more than perfect technique. I appreciate it when someone shares their talent — for example, I admire friends who sing at gatherings because it takes courage and creates a warm atmosphere.

Sugestão: Trả lời đúng nhưng cấu trúc lủng củng và lỗi ngữ pháp (I actually like I want to singing better → I actually want to sing better). Nên nói rõ là chưa học chính quy, giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và nêu lợi ích của phương pháp tự học với ví dụ cụ thể (loại video hoặc kỹ thuật bạn học).

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken formal singing classes. I prefer learning from YouTube and TikTok tutorials, where I follow lessons on breathing exercises and pitch drills that I can practice at home.

× Absolutely yes, I'm a person that really hooked on singing especially sing some popular songs on TikTok or on many popular platforms.

✓ Absolutely yes, I'm a person who is really hooked on singing, especially singing popular songs on TikTok and other platforms.

The phrase 'hooked on' must be followed by a gerund, so 'singing' is correct rather than 'sing'. Use 'who' instead of 'that' for people. Replace 'on many popular platforms' with 'and other platforms' for natural phrasing.

× For instance, I always use spend my time on singing every day like because help me release stress and uplift my mood or reject.

✓ For instance, I always spend my time singing every day because it helps me release stress and uplift my mood.

Use 'spend my time' followed by a gerund 'singing'. Remove 'use' which is incorrect here. Add subject 'it' and verb 'helps' to complete clause. 'Reject' is incorrect and unclear so removed.

× Absolutely yes, because I have a little curiosity about how to sing it better, but I don't learn through the extra class.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I had a little curiosity about how to sing better, but I didn't learn through extra classes.

When referring to past curiosity about learning, use past tense 'had'. Match tense with 'didn't learn' for consistency and pluralize 'classes' for natural collocation.

× I just uh, learn how to sing better from the platforms such as Tik Toks, some Tiktok codes that they teach followers how to sing better, and some techniques of singing.

✓ I just learn how to sing better from platforms such as TikTok, TikTok tutorials that teach followers how to sing better, and singing techniques.

Use singular brand form 'TikTok' and replace 'Tiktok codes' with 'TikTok tutorials' or 'videos'. 'Techniques of singing' is more naturally 'singing techniques'.

× Everyone as long as they want me to sing.

✓ Everyone, as long as they want me to sing for them.

Add 'for them' to clarify the object 'sing for'. Keep pronoun 'they' consistent.

× In fact, I don't really care about this situation because I singing for myself.

✓ In fact, I don't really care about the situation because I sing for myself.

Use base form 'sing' for present simple 'I sing' rather than 'I singing' which is ungrammatical.

× I just want to satisfy myself and I want to see the emotion as throughout the story to the songs for the audience because they will have the same feelings like me.

✓ I just want to satisfy myself and show the emotions in the song's story to the audience so they can feel the same as I do.

Reorder sentence for clarity: 'show the emotions in the song's story' and use 'so they can feel the same as I do' instead of 'have the same feelings like me'.

× I think that is like the best way to bring happiness to people because for me, uh, when I meet some people that they feel negatively or have a sad stories, I always singing some happy songs and other a big songs to make them better.

✓ I think it is one of the best ways to bring happiness to people because, for me, when I meet people who feel negative or have sad stories, I always sing happy or uplifting songs to cheer them up.

Use 'sing' (present simple) not 'singing' after 'I always'. Use 'people who' not 'people that they'. 'A sad stories' should be 'sad stories' and 'a big songs' unclear—replace with 'uplifting songs'. 'Cheer them up' is natural phrasing.

× I don't care about that they singing good or bad, I just get out.

✓ I don't care whether they're singing well or badly; I just step back.

Use 'whether' for alternatives and correct verb form 'they're singing'. Use adverbs 'well'/'badly' to modify singing. 'Get out' is informal and unclear, 'step back' fits context.

× They have enough confidence to show up their talent, their style and the singing.

✓ They have enough confidence to show their talent, style, and singing.

Use 'show' with direct object 'their talent' (not 'show up their'). Remove extra article 'the' before 'singing'.

× In addition, when someone is singing for me, I really strongly believe that I really precious with them.

✓ In addition, when someone sings for me, I truly appreciate them.

'I really strongly believe that I really precious with them' is ungrammatical. Use 'I truly appreciate them' to convey gratitude properly.

× No, I don't think it is necessary to me to take anything in classes because I actually like I want to singing better but I can learn some videos in YouTube or Tiktok to help me sing better or learn some essential skills or techniques.

✓ No, I don't think it is necessary for me to take classes because I want to sing better but I can learn from videos on YouTube or TikTok to help me improve and learn essential skills and techniques.

Use 'for me' not 'to me'. 'Take classes' is the natural collocation. Use 'want to sing' (not 'want to singing'). Use 'learn from videos on' and 'improve' instead of 'sing better'.