Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru cha ra kehi bhul haru pani cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra sentence haru lai chhoto ra spashta banaunu parcha. English ma 'hobby' ko plural 'hobbies' ho ra 'Finn' ko thau ma 'fun' hunu parcha. Tapai le 'dopamine' ko barema bhanda ramro cha, tara sentence lai sajilo ra natural banaunu parcha.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it is one of my hobbies. Singing different kinds of music makes me feel energetic and happy throughout the day.

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma thulo samasya cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra sentence haru lai sajilo ra spashta banaunu parcha. 'Used to have singing classes' ra 'I used to sing in front of my laptop watching YouTube videos' jasto sentence haru prayog garnu parcha.

Exemplo: Yes, I learnt singing when I was young at school. During the COVID-19 pandemic, I also practiced singing by watching YouTube videos at home.

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar ma kehi bhul haru cha jastai 'are her emotional song' ra 'my dear how's mean'. Tapai le sentence haru lai sajilo ra spashta banaunu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra supporting details ma linking words prayog garnu parcha.

Exemplo: I want to sing emotional songs that express my feelings. Therefore, I would like to dedicate music to my parents and my loved ones so they can understand my emotions better.

Sugestão: Tapai ko uttar adhuro ra asamjhana cha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra sentence haru lai pura ra spashta banaunu parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'because' ra 'therefore' prayog garnu parcha ra sentence haru lai logical banaunu parcha.

Exemplo: Definitely, I think singing brings happiness to people because music can reduce stress and improve mood. Therefore, singing makes people feel happier and more relaxed.

× I love to sing as one of my hobby is to sing all song in my future and Finn kind of music gives me a different energetic feelings also increases some dopamine in my body which makes me a happy person throughout the day.

✓ I love to sing as one of my hobbies is to sing all songs in my future and Finn kind of music gives me different energetic feelings and also increases some dopamine in my body which makes me a happy person throughout the day.

The word 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it refers to one of multiple hobbies. 'Song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple songs. 'Feelings' should not have 'a' before it because 'feelings' is plural. Also, 'some dopamine' is correct as dopamine is uncountable.

× Yes, when I was young in my school days are used to have were singing classes from my teachers and also during a pandemic of COVID-19.

✓ Yes, when I was young in my school days, I used to have singing classes from my teachers and also during the COVID-19 pandemic.

The phrase 'are used to have were' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I used to have' to indicate past habitual action. Also, 'during a pandemic of COVID-19' should be 'during the COVID-19 pandemic' for correct article usage and natural phrasing.

× I used to say it in front of my laptop answered some YouTube channel which has also seeing a song and just starts singing and.

✓ I used to sing in front of my laptop, watching some YouTube channels that have singing songs, and just start singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Say it' should be 'sing'. 'Answered some YouTube channel' is incorrect; it should be 'watching some YouTube channels'. 'Which has also seeing a song' is incorrect; it should be 'that have singing songs'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× As I always love to sing are her emotional song that expresses my emotions.

✓ As I always love to sing my emotional songs that express my emotions.

'Are her emotional song' is incorrect. It should be 'my emotional songs' to correctly refer to the student's own songs. Pronouns must agree with the subject.

× That's why I would like to dedicate some music to my parents and my dear how's mean so that they can understand my emotions and expressions of feelings through the music.

✓ That's why I would like to dedicate some music to my parents and my dear ones so that they can understand my emotions and expressions of feelings through the music.

'My dear how's mean' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'my dear ones' to refer to loved ones. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Definitely I. I think. Singing gives us hapiness. And like blazer in everyone's lives as music are those which increases the. Set it down in level of a brain and makes a person more happier and also make.

✓ Definitely, I think singing gives us happiness and lightens everyone's lives as music is something that decreases stress levels in the brain and makes a person happier.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain many errors. 'Hapiness' is misspelled as 'happiness'. 'Like blazer' should be 'lightens'. 'Music are those which increases the. Set it down in level of a brain' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'music is something that decreases stress levels in the brain'. 'More happier' is incorrect; 'happier' alone is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.