Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with simple, correct sentences. For example, say you like singing Korean pop songs and enjoy thinking about the lyrics.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings. I especially enjoy singing Korean pop songs because their lyrics are interesting and meaningful.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, say you have not learned singing formally due to financial reasons but want to learn in the future.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I couldn't afford singing lessons. However, if I have the chance, I would like to take singing classes.

Sugestão: Your answer is very unclear and difficult to understand. Try to give a direct answer and explain why. For example, say you want to sing for your mother because her singing helps you relax.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mother because her singing helps me feel relaxed and happy. I hope my singing can make her feel the same way.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and explain your opinion clearly. For example, say that music can improve people's mood and make them happy.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness. When people feel sad, listening to songs can make them feel better and happier.

× When I sing song I worries lyrics especially I I like to think Korean.

✓ When I sing songs, I worry about the lyrics, especially because I like to think in Korean.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to singing multiple songs in general. Also, 'worries' is incorrect for the subject 'I'; it should be 'worry' to agree with the singular first person subject. Additionally, the sentence structure was unclear and has been improved for clarity.

× No, because I didn't have the money to go to school to learn how to singing.

✓ No, because I didn't have the money to go to school to learn how to sing.

After 'learn how to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'singing' should be corrected to 'sing'.

× So I will rate think by myself.

✓ So I will try to think by myself.

The phrase 'rate think' is incorrect. It seems the intended meaning is 'try to think'. 'Will' is correctly used as a modal verb for future intention, but the verb following it must be correct.

× However if I have a chance I wanna go there to learn how to sing.

✓ However, if I have a chance, I want to go there to learn how to sing.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with the proper form 'want to' in formal speech. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× It is my mother, see worries sings me to relax.

✓ It is my mother; she sings to me to help me relax.

The pronoun 'see' is incorrect and should be 'she'. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and has been corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× A hard voice is very clear E And when I say.

✓ Her strong voice is very clear, and when I listen, it comforts me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It has been restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× When I listen has songs I ordered to relax so.

✓ When I listen to songs, I feel relaxed.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It has been corrected to a proper sentence structure with correct prepositions and verb forms.

× Some people prefer to listen to music even if they they are feeling is no good if they listened some songs.

✓ Some people prefer to listen to music even if they are not feeling well; if they listen to some songs, it makes them happy.

The sentence had plural and singular agreement issues and redundant words. 'They they' is a repetition error. 'Feeling is no good' is incorrect; 'are not feeling well' is appropriate. 'Listened' should be 'listen' to match the present tense context.

× They makes me happy.

✓ They make me happy.

'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' without the 's'. 'Makes' is singular and does not agree with the plural subject.