Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences simple and clear, and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add one or two supporting details.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy. Since I was a child, I have enjoyed singing songs, and it helps me relax.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to use simple sentences and correct grammar. Also, answer the question directly and explain your feelings clearly.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing properly. When I was a child, my mother tried to teach me, but I was shy and not very interested.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Try to focus on one person you want to sing for and explain why. Use simple and clear sentences.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my future wife because she is very special to me. Singing for her would make her happy.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and better grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why singing brings happiness.

Exemplo: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel refreshed and relaxed. When people sing, they enjoy themselves and feel satisfied.

× Yes, I like singing because singing is very much a interesting things for me because when I was a child I know ideally I do singing because I like this very much.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing is a very interesting thing for me because when I was a child I knew ideally I would sing because I liked it very much.

The phrase 'a interesting things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'a very interesting thing'. Also, 'I know' should be past tense 'I knew' to match 'when I was a child'. 'I do singing' is awkward; 'I would sing' fits better. 'I like this very much' should be past tense 'I liked it very much' to maintain tense consistency.

× Actually I never learned how to sing, but when I order child, my mom's try to learn something about singing in.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing, but when I was a child, my mom tried to teach me something about singing.

'Order child' is incorrect; it should be 'was a child'. 'My mom's try' is incorrect; it should be 'my mom tried'. 'Learn something about singing in' is awkward; 'teach me something about singing' is correct. Also, 'never learned' is better as 'have never learned' to indicate experience up to now.

× Actually I never learned how to sing, but when I order child, my mom's try to learn something about singing in.

✓ Actually, I have never learned how to sing, but when I was a child, my mom tried to teach me something about singing.

The preposition 'in' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'teach me something about singing' without 'in'.

× But I have no interested in singing.

✓ But I am not interested in singing.

'I have no interested' is incorrect because 'interested' is an adjective and requires the verb 'to be'. The correct form is 'I am not interested'.

× Actually there are many persons who are my personal George enjoyable person, but I think when I make a thing, I obviously A and it said to sing for my future voice because she is my very beautiful George.

✓ Actually, there are many people who are my personal favorite enjoyable persons, but I think when I do something, I obviously sing for my future voice because she is my very beautiful favorite.

'Persons' is less common than 'people'. 'Personal George enjoyable person' is unclear; likely intended 'personal favorite enjoyable person'. 'Make a thing' is incorrect; 'do something' is correct. The sentence is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Actually there are many persons who are my personal George enjoyable person, but I think when I make a thing, I obviously A and it said to sing for my future voice because she is my very beautiful George.

✓ Actually, there are many people I enjoy personally, but I think when I do something, I obviously sing for my future voice because she is my very beautiful favorite.

The sentence is structurally incorrect and unclear. It needs rephrasing to make sense. 'George' seems to be a misused word or name; replaced with 'favorite' for clarity.

× Actually there are many persons who are my personal George enjoyable person, but I think when I make a thing, I obviously A and it said to sing for my future voice because she is my very beautiful George.

✓ Actually, there are many people I enjoy personally, but I think when I do something, I obviously sing for my future voice because she is my very beautiful favorite.

Pronouns and nouns are misused and unclear. 'She is my very beautiful George' is unclear; 'she' should refer to a person, but 'George' is a male name. The sentence needs clearer pronoun references.

× Definitely. I think you mean can bring happiness to people because when people singing a song and it makes people very much a referrer refreshing and relaxing.

✓ Definitely. I think singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing a song, it makes them feel very refreshed and relaxed.

'You mean can bring' is incorrect; should be 'singing can bring'. 'People singing a song' should be 'people sing a song'. 'Very much a referrer refreshing and relaxing' is incorrect; correct form is 'very refreshed and relaxed'.

× So I think people obviously to singing for their personal satisfaction.

✓ So I think people obviously sing for their personal satisfaction.

'People obviously to singing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'people obviously sing'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here.