Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain how singing helps you relax and express your feelings in a clear way.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it acts as a therapy that soothes my mind and relieves stress. Whenever I sing, I feel peaceful and it helps me express my emotions effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain how you learn singing informally. Keep your sentences complete and coherent.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. However, I often listen to songs on Spotify and other apps, which help me learn singing techniques. I also practice singing regularly, especially when I am alone at home.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Use proper sentence structure and linking words to express your feelings clearly. For example, explain why you want to sing for your mother and how it would make her feel.

Exemplo: I want to sing a song for my mother because she raised me and supported me in many ways. Singing a beautiful song would be my way of thanking her and making her feel appreciated.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words. Try to explain your opinion with specific reasons and examples to make it more effective.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people, especially those going through difficult times. For instance, singing or listening to music can help relieve stress and uplift their mood, providing comfort during hard moments.

× Singing is a kind of therapy that heals my inner peace.

✓ Singing is a kind of therapy that brings me inner peace.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'heals my inner peace', which is not a proper collocation. 'Inner peace' is a state of mind, not something that can be 'healed'. The correct verb is 'brings' or 'gives' to express that singing helps achieve inner peace.

× And helps my mind is a stress burst.

✓ It helps my mind relieve stress.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Helps my mind is a stress burst' does not make sense. The intended meaning is that singing helps reduce stress, so the corrected sentence is 'It helps my mind relieve stress.'

× My feelings.

✓ It also soothes my feelings.

'My feelings.' is a sentence fragment and does not convey a complete thought. Adding 'It also soothes my feelings.' completes the idea that singing positively affects emotions.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

'Learnt' is a British English past tense and past participle form, while 'learned' is the American English form. Both are correct, but since the rest of the transcript uses American English spelling (e.g., 'learned'), 'learned' is preferred for consistency.

× I usually you still hear a lot of songs from next from Spotify and more apps which actually help me learning singing.

✓ I usually listen to a lot of songs on Spotify and other apps which actually help me learn singing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'I usually you still hear' is incorrect. The correct subject-verb phrase is 'I usually listen to'. Also, 'help me learning singing' should be 'help me learn singing' because 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb.

× And how to sing? Usually sing every time.

✓ And how to sing? I usually sing all the time.

The original sentences are incomplete and lack proper subjects. Adding 'I' as the subject and correcting the verb form makes the sentence complete and clear.

× When I'm going out in my bathroom, Every.

✓ I usually sing when I'm in my bathroom.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'When I'm going out in my bathroom, Every.' does not make sense. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× I want to sing a song for my mother who actually raised me from the child who helped me in a lot of ways, so I want to thank her without a beautiful song.

✓ I want to sing a song for my mother who actually raised me since I was a child and helped me in many ways, so I want to thank her with a beautiful song.

The original sentence has incorrect phrasing 'raised me from the child' and 'without a beautiful song' which should be 'since I was a child' and 'with a beautiful song' respectively. Also, 'a lot of ways' is better expressed as 'many ways'.

× Which she feels better?

✓ So that she feels better.

'Which she feels better?' is a sentence fragment and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'so that she feels better' to express purpose.